The necris story
- Thread starter NeoNite
- Start date
-
Two Factor Authentication is now available on BeyondUnreal Forums. To configure it, visit your Profile and look for the "Two Step Verification" option on the left side. We can send codes via email (may be slower) or you can set up any TOTP Authenticator app on your phone (Authy, Google Authenticator, etc) to deliver codes. It is highly recommended that you configure this to keep your account safe.
- Status
Oh wait hm..
Ok here's my e-mail (well, one of them
)
n3on1t3@hotmail.com
Notice the o in n3o is the letter O, not nr 0.
401 comments.. so unreal..
Ok here's my e-mail (well, one of them
)n3on1t3@hotmail.com
Notice the o in n3o is the letter O, not nr 0.
401 comments.. so unreal..
Ok i'll check it out, i'm on my way, i'm off, i'm gone!
Yeah nice pic.. maybe maybe they'll do so..
Yeah nice pic.. maybe maybe they'll do so..
LB: Oh .. me too me too ... Please
zenda_ya@yahoo.com
Neo: looking forward to that next part. Also making enquiries about that ASUS board that will be ready for the P3 1.2gig cpu. I've been reading up on it. Sounds really good.
zenda_ya@yahoo.com
Neo: looking forward to that next part. Also making enquiries about that ASUS board that will be ready for the P3 1.2gig cpu. I've been reading up on it. Sounds really good.
Dahamn, this thread got huge! Someone's been busy lately, I guess.
Apologies at my flakitude, but I'm transitioning again for the end of the summer and won't be 'netside again until next weekend probably. I'll catch up then (tonight I have to pack to move back across the state again)
later y'all, happy storywriting
Apologies at my flakitude, but I'm transitioning again for the end of the summer and won't be 'netside again until next weekend probably. I'll catch up then (tonight I have to pack to move back across the state again)
later y'all, happy storywriting
"All fun and no games make Visse a mean gal"
Mkay, here's part 10 of Nali skins.
Yesterday I've been thinking a lot about the next story. Of course it'll envolve Necris, but also a couple of other races.. and.. well you'll just have to wait. It'll be a totally different story, once again.
Part 10: The path…
*****************
Falling down a small chasm, the gang landed in a safe spot, on a field of grass. Visse got up to her feet, and looked back, ready for any Skaarj trying to engage attack on them. But nothing happened.
A Nali moon was shedding some light onto the dark surroundings.
Laque joined her, while George helped the others on their feet.
“Careful there”, Agouba yelled,” you Skaarj are so clumsy.”
“Take it easy little man”, George growled.
Agouba swallowed and walked up to Visse.
“So what about the other Skaarj?”
Visse slowly turned her head towards him, carefully looking at the path lying above them.
“Obviously they’ve decided not to follow us. Maybe they’re afraid of something?”
“Hm but what about the Freylinn”, Agouba mumbled, “how will we get back to the..”
Laque interrupted him.
“Why, when we get back, we’ll simply have to cross their outpost once again.”
“Great”, Agouba said with a whining voice.
“How’s the head wound?”
“It.. it needs to be taken care of it I guess, I’m feeling dizzy..” Agouba sat down, with his head in his hands.
Barak took a bandage out of his backpack and took care of that ugly wound.
“Don’t have to lose hope this quickly Agouba”, Barak smiled, “trust me, we Necris have been through worse.”
Visse heard him saying that. She glanced at Laque, and she was grinning.
“Yeah we have, haven’t we?”
“Sure”, Visse whispered, “now all we need to do, is take care of Neo’s leg, and .. well…who was the map?”
George unfolded a dusty map, and he tried making out their exact location.
“Hm, obviously we’re riiiiight here…”
“Well duh”, Visse mumbled, “we haven’t started our journey yet. What I meant saying was, where do we go from here?”
“Let’s see” George studied the map, and Visse grew more impatient with the minute.
“We’re supposed to follow .. a path.”
“A path”, Laque said and yanked the map out of his hands,” let’s see where this path leads to, shall we?”
“Suuure”, George sighed.
“Damn you Necris females have a bad temper.”
“No we don’t”, Visse answered him while studying the map.
“See Laque, this path leads us to a small valley and a village.. apparently, and further on lies a huge building, a fortress maybe.. I can’t make out what this is.. another village? Anyway, behind the fortress lies .. a valley.. again…and a huge rock formation.”
Neo stood up, and tried walking back and forth.
“The leg is ok I guess, no severe damage. I’m all right”
Visse smiled. “Good, cause we’re about to make a long journey I’m afraid. Good thing we Necris don’t need much supplies. We can go 2 days in a row without food or drinks. But the others?”
George shook his head. “I’m sure there’s plenty of wildlife around these parts. I maybe a guide, but every Skaarj has hunting skills. I’ll take care of myself , Rumiko and Agouba.”
Agouba scratched his head. “You’ll do that for me?”
“Sure thing, little man”
“Stop calling me little man!”
“But you are!”
“OK enough with the bull****”, Laque yelled, “let’s go. Neo you’re sure the leg is fine?”
“No problem, I’m with you guys/girls/things .. you know”.
“The path starts right beyond this corner”, Visse said while scanning the map and looking at the surroundings.
“We can’t possibly miss it.”
The small group walked up to the “corner” and in front of them , there was the path, made out of brown-red stones.
“Here we go”, Barak sighed, “I wonder what is waiting for us out there…”
Visse grinned. “Nothing my knife can’t handle, baby..”
They must’ve been walking for an hour, when Rumiko all of the sudden , obviously irritated, groaned:
“Why don’t these lanterns work?”
“They used to I guess”, Agouba smiled at her, “but when the Skaarj condemned this area, turned it into a forbidden zone for all the Nali…”
“Oh yeah right, crappy path, crappy planet, why do we have to go on this stupid quest. I can hardly see anything…”
“Stop whining”, Visse said with a hoarse voice.
“Maybe we should sleep, rest, right here”, Laque muttered. “We Necris might have incredible stamina, but obviously our fellow travellers need a good night rest?”
“A night on Nalina is around 10 Nali hours”, Visse whispered (10 N.H.=16 human hours)
“Ok, why not. We’ll camp right here, guys.”
Agouba fell to his feet, and immediately went to sleep. He was exhausted.
“Well look at that, our little man…”,Barak grinned while looking at Visse.
“I’m not tired.. what should we do in the meantime..”
“Anyone up for a game of “DethSquad” (a popular Necris “card” game)
“Sure, but let’s keep it quiet, Rumiko and George are already sleeping .. “
“That was fast”, Visse said. It was hard for her to imagine what life would be like, if you’re not a Necris.
“Who’s first?”, Laque smirked while looking at the others.
“I am”, Neo mumbled and the first card had hit the deck before the others were even able to breath…
Dawn.
“OOH I give up”, Barak groaned, “you’re the master. You’ve beaten me, as you did Laque and Neo…”
“Heeehee heee!!!!”, Visse cried. She got up from the grass, and started dancing like a mad cat.
“Be quiet”, Neo whispered, “you’ll wake the others, It’s pretty early.”
“OH nevermind”, Rumiko yelled, “ I’m already awake, thanks to miss ego-tripper Visse over there!”
Visse growled. “Shut up! I’m having fun here!”
Rumiko slowly got up, stretched and yawned.
“Well, we do have a nice view here, don’t we. 2 suns.. been a while since I’ve seen anything like that.”
“Hmwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!”
“What was that?”, Agouba cried, startled and shocked!
“Oh it’s just me”, George smiled, “I was yawning.”
“’I’ll take care of the eh.. meal.. food yeah.. give me a minute here..”
George took his ripper and disappeared in the nearby bushes.
“Will be back in 15 Nali minutes…”
20 Nali minutes later, George came back with a big, fat juicy Nalicow.
“I’m baaaaaaaack!”, he yelled.
“Oh no, not a Nali cow, you bastard!”, Agouba cried, while tears where running down his face.
“Get a grip”, Visse growled while slapping him in the face.” You want food, well.. it’s the best George could do.. just be thankful!”
“Take it easy on the little guy”, Barak said, while looking at the beautiful panorama he had over a Nali valley.
“I’m sorry, I can’t stand this pathetic whining..”, Visse hissed.
“Of course not”, Barak said and winked at her”, You’re a fierce blaidenmaiden.”
Visse smirked.
“Bet ya..”
When the Skaarj, Nali and Acron had finished their meal, that juicy Nalicow, they walked up to the 4 Necris.
“We aren’t able to make contact with our home planet Necron”, Visse sighed.
“Of course not”, Agouba whispered, trying not to look her in the eyes, “Skaarj have disruptors aimed at this place.”
“Look, Agouba, I’ve exaggerated back there, I’m sorry ok?”
Agouba started smiling once again.
“Just DON’T let it happen again!
“okay”, Agouba said while cringing his teeth.
“Where do we .. like go from here?”, Rumiko said, while burping.
“I see you’ve enjoyed your meal?”, laque said while showing a faint smile.
“Bet ya, those cows are really tasty..”
“We make our way through this valley”, Laque explained to the others, “it’s no big valley as you can see, it should take us up to 1 or 2 Nali hours to cross.. what do you think Agouba?”
“Yeah that should be right. Beyond this valley lies an ancient Nali village if .. it’s right there on the map right?”
“It is”, Laque answered him, carefully looking around.
“Are you expecting any danger?”, Visse asked her clan leader.
“Not really, but you never know.. right? I mean, look at our . “previous adventure” on earth..”
“Expect the unexpected”, Visse said while showing a big grin.
“That’s my girl”, Laque smiled, while squinting her eyes.
“OK guys/girls/its.. whatever, let’s go..”
It might have been a small Valley which our group was crossing, nevertheless it was an impressive one. Everywhere around them were trees, animals.. dragon birds flying over. This place was alive. An ancient heritage of an old, forgotten Nali generation.
There was a big waterfall, and a small lake. It was more impressive and breath taking than Nyleve’s falls had ever been. However, the water was yellow.
A sharp, warm wind embraced the small band while they were taking a breather, right in the centre of the Valley.
“This way, to the north.. “, Visse said while looking at her surroundings. She hate to admit it, but she was impressed. Necris were nocturnal beings, not used to bright landscapes and day and night, sun and moon…
But she noticed the beauty of this planet. And she kind of like it.
The many dragon birds flying by were making screeching sounds, almost as if they were extremely excited by seeing the visitors coming to their territory. How long had it been since they had seen anyone…?
Finally, the group made it to the end of the Valley, and were approaching a big rock formation.
“There, that cave.. it should lead us to the village, mentioned on the map…”
“yes”, Agouba added, “an ancient old Nali village, once a..”
“We don’t care about it’s history”, Visse muttered, “we simply want to cross it, so we’re once again, one step closer to those damn skins..”
“Shame I forgot my screenshooter”, Rumiko sniffed, “this place is breathtaking.”
The group disappeared in the cold cave.
All of the sudden they had reached the village.
“Well that was quick”, Barak whispered, “one triniton we’re in that cave, the next we’re .. at the village.”
“Nali teleportation magic”, Agouba answered him.
“But I never saw the teleporter.”
Agouba smirked.
“Of course you didn’t. We used it in one of our castles, called Elsinore. You simply step into one of those teleporters, and there’s no flash, nothing.. you simply walk through.”
“Elsinore?”, Neo smiled, “what a beautiful name.. man this is great stuff, give me a couple of Kraylins here, I need to write this stuff down in my notepad! This is all so exciting!”
“This is not what one would have considered to have been a .. prosperous village. Only a couple of houses, and one well..”
“Yes, it almost looks like an exact copy of the famous harobed village.”, Agouba said while whipping his nose.
“Most our ancient villages look the same.. small settlements…”
“SO this is how you Nali used to live?”, Visse said, it almost sounded as if she was interested.
“Yes”.
“How primitive.”
Agouba mumbled and walked towards a shiny rock, covered with moss.
“There!” He kicked the rock, and immediately a cry resounded.
“YOU idiot!”, the rock yelled at Agouba!
“Wh..wha.. wha..??”, Agouba stuttered and took 2 steps back , frightened of what he might see.
The rock unfolded itself, and a turtle –like creature was looking at him, angry and patting his rear end.
“Where you come from, does everyone kick one another in the bum?”
“N..n..n..”
“Say what, Nali?”, the rock yelled.
“NO SIR”, Agouba cried and fell to his feet, waving his hand as if he was praying.
The rock rolled his eyes and sighed.
“Get up you silly Nali. Man everytime you yell at those idiots, they fall to their feet and kiss the ground…can you believe that?”
“Who are you”, Visse asked him.
“I could ask you the same question! Kicking me in the arse!”
Visse stared at the rock. It couldn’t stand her fierce look anymore and answered:
“Ok ok take it easy lady. I’m Moork, a rockdwarf.
“A rockdwarf? First time I’ve heard about any rockdwarfs on Nalina. But then again, this is only my second visit to this planet.”
“Oh so you’re a Noob eh?”, the rock mumbled, “Noobs always show disrespect to the veterans of a world. Look at that stupid Nali grrrr!”
“I’m so sorry, I’m so sorry”, agouba cried.
“Get on your feet”, Visse growled.
“It’s been a long time I’ve seen anyone around these parts”, the rockdwarf said, while carefully looking at each groupmember. “What do you .. eh.. creatures look for ?”
“I guess we can trust you”, Laque smiled,” we look for Nali skins.”
“Oh dear, oh dear”, the rock laughed., “well sorry I can’t help you. Bye now.”
“WAIT”, barak yelled.
But the rockdwarf had returned to it’s previous state and didn’t move.
“Little son of a bitch”, Neo whispered.
“Ok, never mind, let’s cross this village, and .. we’ll wind up, show me that map again”, Laque said, trying to remain calm.
“We’ll wind up .. at that fortress .. so soon?”
“An ancient fortress”, Agouba smiled.
“Everything is ancient around these parts”, Visse said while frowning, and showing her teeth”, so stop saying that you idiot.”
Agouba looked at his feet and turned around.
“Well what are we waiting for? Let’s move on… stupid rock.”
At the end of the village they noticed another cave entrance.
And once again, before they knew it, they had left the village behind them, and had arrived at the ancient fortress.
Agouba seemed shocked.
“What’s wrong?”, Visse asked him, “someone stepped on a Nali plant?”
Neo smirked.
“No, no, do any of you even know what this place is???”
“Nooo, we don’t, .. do tell us.”, Barak answered him while looking at a gigantic, impressive what appeared to be a former Nali fortress.
“This is, what the older Nalis call.. the DARK ARENA!”
Every single group member stared up to the mighty building.
Mkay, here's part 10 of Nali skins.
Yesterday I've been thinking a lot about the next story. Of course it'll envolve Necris, but also a couple of other races.. and.. well you'll just have to wait. It'll be a totally different story, once again.
Part 10: The path…
*****************
Falling down a small chasm, the gang landed in a safe spot, on a field of grass. Visse got up to her feet, and looked back, ready for any Skaarj trying to engage attack on them. But nothing happened.
A Nali moon was shedding some light onto the dark surroundings.
Laque joined her, while George helped the others on their feet.
“Careful there”, Agouba yelled,” you Skaarj are so clumsy.”
“Take it easy little man”, George growled.
Agouba swallowed and walked up to Visse.
“So what about the other Skaarj?”
Visse slowly turned her head towards him, carefully looking at the path lying above them.
“Obviously they’ve decided not to follow us. Maybe they’re afraid of something?”
“Hm but what about the Freylinn”, Agouba mumbled, “how will we get back to the..”
Laque interrupted him.
“Why, when we get back, we’ll simply have to cross their outpost once again.”
“Great”, Agouba said with a whining voice.
“How’s the head wound?”
“It.. it needs to be taken care of it I guess, I’m feeling dizzy..” Agouba sat down, with his head in his hands.
Barak took a bandage out of his backpack and took care of that ugly wound.
“Don’t have to lose hope this quickly Agouba”, Barak smiled, “trust me, we Necris have been through worse.”
Visse heard him saying that. She glanced at Laque, and she was grinning.
“Yeah we have, haven’t we?”
“Sure”, Visse whispered, “now all we need to do, is take care of Neo’s leg, and .. well…who was the map?”
George unfolded a dusty map, and he tried making out their exact location.
“Hm, obviously we’re riiiiight here…”
“Well duh”, Visse mumbled, “we haven’t started our journey yet. What I meant saying was, where do we go from here?”
“Let’s see” George studied the map, and Visse grew more impatient with the minute.
“We’re supposed to follow .. a path.”
“A path”, Laque said and yanked the map out of his hands,” let’s see where this path leads to, shall we?”
“Suuure”, George sighed.
“Damn you Necris females have a bad temper.”
“No we don’t”, Visse answered him while studying the map.
“See Laque, this path leads us to a small valley and a village.. apparently, and further on lies a huge building, a fortress maybe.. I can’t make out what this is.. another village? Anyway, behind the fortress lies .. a valley.. again…and a huge rock formation.”
Neo stood up, and tried walking back and forth.
“The leg is ok I guess, no severe damage. I’m all right”
Visse smiled. “Good, cause we’re about to make a long journey I’m afraid. Good thing we Necris don’t need much supplies. We can go 2 days in a row without food or drinks. But the others?”
George shook his head. “I’m sure there’s plenty of wildlife around these parts. I maybe a guide, but every Skaarj has hunting skills. I’ll take care of myself , Rumiko and Agouba.”
Agouba scratched his head. “You’ll do that for me?”
“Sure thing, little man”
“Stop calling me little man!”
“But you are!”
“OK enough with the bull****”, Laque yelled, “let’s go. Neo you’re sure the leg is fine?”
“No problem, I’m with you guys/girls/things .. you know”.
“The path starts right beyond this corner”, Visse said while scanning the map and looking at the surroundings.
“We can’t possibly miss it.”
The small group walked up to the “corner” and in front of them , there was the path, made out of brown-red stones.
“Here we go”, Barak sighed, “I wonder what is waiting for us out there…”
Visse grinned. “Nothing my knife can’t handle, baby..”
They must’ve been walking for an hour, when Rumiko all of the sudden , obviously irritated, groaned:
“Why don’t these lanterns work?”
“They used to I guess”, Agouba smiled at her, “but when the Skaarj condemned this area, turned it into a forbidden zone for all the Nali…”
“Oh yeah right, crappy path, crappy planet, why do we have to go on this stupid quest. I can hardly see anything…”
“Stop whining”, Visse said with a hoarse voice.
“Maybe we should sleep, rest, right here”, Laque muttered. “We Necris might have incredible stamina, but obviously our fellow travellers need a good night rest?”
“A night on Nalina is around 10 Nali hours”, Visse whispered (10 N.H.=16 human hours)
“Ok, why not. We’ll camp right here, guys.”
Agouba fell to his feet, and immediately went to sleep. He was exhausted.
“Well look at that, our little man…”,Barak grinned while looking at Visse.
“I’m not tired.. what should we do in the meantime..”
“Anyone up for a game of “DethSquad” (a popular Necris “card” game)
“Sure, but let’s keep it quiet, Rumiko and George are already sleeping .. “
“That was fast”, Visse said. It was hard for her to imagine what life would be like, if you’re not a Necris.
“Who’s first?”, Laque smirked while looking at the others.
“I am”, Neo mumbled and the first card had hit the deck before the others were even able to breath…
Dawn.
“OOH I give up”, Barak groaned, “you’re the master. You’ve beaten me, as you did Laque and Neo…”
“Heeehee heee!!!!”, Visse cried. She got up from the grass, and started dancing like a mad cat.
“Be quiet”, Neo whispered, “you’ll wake the others, It’s pretty early.”
“OH nevermind”, Rumiko yelled, “ I’m already awake, thanks to miss ego-tripper Visse over there!”
Visse growled. “Shut up! I’m having fun here!”
Rumiko slowly got up, stretched and yawned.
“Well, we do have a nice view here, don’t we. 2 suns.. been a while since I’ve seen anything like that.”
“Hmwwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!”
“What was that?”, Agouba cried, startled and shocked!
“Oh it’s just me”, George smiled, “I was yawning.”
“’I’ll take care of the eh.. meal.. food yeah.. give me a minute here..”
George took his ripper and disappeared in the nearby bushes.
“Will be back in 15 Nali minutes…”
20 Nali minutes later, George came back with a big, fat juicy Nalicow.
“I’m baaaaaaaack!”, he yelled.
“Oh no, not a Nali cow, you bastard!”, Agouba cried, while tears where running down his face.
“Get a grip”, Visse growled while slapping him in the face.” You want food, well.. it’s the best George could do.. just be thankful!”
“Take it easy on the little guy”, Barak said, while looking at the beautiful panorama he had over a Nali valley.
“I’m sorry, I can’t stand this pathetic whining..”, Visse hissed.
“Of course not”, Barak said and winked at her”, You’re a fierce blaidenmaiden.”
Visse smirked.
“Bet ya..”
When the Skaarj, Nali and Acron had finished their meal, that juicy Nalicow, they walked up to the 4 Necris.
“We aren’t able to make contact with our home planet Necron”, Visse sighed.
“Of course not”, Agouba whispered, trying not to look her in the eyes, “Skaarj have disruptors aimed at this place.”
“Look, Agouba, I’ve exaggerated back there, I’m sorry ok?”
Agouba started smiling once again.
“Just DON’T let it happen again!
“okay”, Agouba said while cringing his teeth.
“Where do we .. like go from here?”, Rumiko said, while burping.
“I see you’ve enjoyed your meal?”, laque said while showing a faint smile.
“Bet ya, those cows are really tasty..”
“We make our way through this valley”, Laque explained to the others, “it’s no big valley as you can see, it should take us up to 1 or 2 Nali hours to cross.. what do you think Agouba?”
“Yeah that should be right. Beyond this valley lies an ancient Nali village if .. it’s right there on the map right?”
“It is”, Laque answered him, carefully looking around.
“Are you expecting any danger?”, Visse asked her clan leader.
“Not really, but you never know.. right? I mean, look at our . “previous adventure” on earth..”
“Expect the unexpected”, Visse said while showing a big grin.
“That’s my girl”, Laque smiled, while squinting her eyes.
“OK guys/girls/its.. whatever, let’s go..”
It might have been a small Valley which our group was crossing, nevertheless it was an impressive one. Everywhere around them were trees, animals.. dragon birds flying over. This place was alive. An ancient heritage of an old, forgotten Nali generation.
There was a big waterfall, and a small lake. It was more impressive and breath taking than Nyleve’s falls had ever been. However, the water was yellow.
A sharp, warm wind embraced the small band while they were taking a breather, right in the centre of the Valley.
“This way, to the north.. “, Visse said while looking at her surroundings. She hate to admit it, but she was impressed. Necris were nocturnal beings, not used to bright landscapes and day and night, sun and moon…
But she noticed the beauty of this planet. And she kind of like it.
The many dragon birds flying by were making screeching sounds, almost as if they were extremely excited by seeing the visitors coming to their territory. How long had it been since they had seen anyone…?
Finally, the group made it to the end of the Valley, and were approaching a big rock formation.
“There, that cave.. it should lead us to the village, mentioned on the map…”
“yes”, Agouba added, “an ancient old Nali village, once a..”
“We don’t care about it’s history”, Visse muttered, “we simply want to cross it, so we’re once again, one step closer to those damn skins..”
“Shame I forgot my screenshooter”, Rumiko sniffed, “this place is breathtaking.”
The group disappeared in the cold cave.
All of the sudden they had reached the village.
“Well that was quick”, Barak whispered, “one triniton we’re in that cave, the next we’re .. at the village.”
“Nali teleportation magic”, Agouba answered him.
“But I never saw the teleporter.”
Agouba smirked.
“Of course you didn’t. We used it in one of our castles, called Elsinore. You simply step into one of those teleporters, and there’s no flash, nothing.. you simply walk through.”
“Elsinore?”, Neo smiled, “what a beautiful name.. man this is great stuff, give me a couple of Kraylins here, I need to write this stuff down in my notepad! This is all so exciting!”
“This is not what one would have considered to have been a .. prosperous village. Only a couple of houses, and one well..”
“Yes, it almost looks like an exact copy of the famous harobed village.”, Agouba said while whipping his nose.
“Most our ancient villages look the same.. small settlements…”
“SO this is how you Nali used to live?”, Visse said, it almost sounded as if she was interested.
“Yes”.
“How primitive.”
Agouba mumbled and walked towards a shiny rock, covered with moss.
“There!” He kicked the rock, and immediately a cry resounded.
“YOU idiot!”, the rock yelled at Agouba!
“Wh..wha.. wha..??”, Agouba stuttered and took 2 steps back , frightened of what he might see.
The rock unfolded itself, and a turtle –like creature was looking at him, angry and patting his rear end.
“Where you come from, does everyone kick one another in the bum?”
“N..n..n..”
“Say what, Nali?”, the rock yelled.
“NO SIR”, Agouba cried and fell to his feet, waving his hand as if he was praying.
The rock rolled his eyes and sighed.
“Get up you silly Nali. Man everytime you yell at those idiots, they fall to their feet and kiss the ground…can you believe that?”
“Who are you”, Visse asked him.
“I could ask you the same question! Kicking me in the arse!”
Visse stared at the rock. It couldn’t stand her fierce look anymore and answered:
“Ok ok take it easy lady. I’m Moork, a rockdwarf.
“A rockdwarf? First time I’ve heard about any rockdwarfs on Nalina. But then again, this is only my second visit to this planet.”
“Oh so you’re a Noob eh?”, the rock mumbled, “Noobs always show disrespect to the veterans of a world. Look at that stupid Nali grrrr!”
“I’m so sorry, I’m so sorry”, agouba cried.
“Get on your feet”, Visse growled.
“It’s been a long time I’ve seen anyone around these parts”, the rockdwarf said, while carefully looking at each groupmember. “What do you .. eh.. creatures look for ?”
“I guess we can trust you”, Laque smiled,” we look for Nali skins.”
“Oh dear, oh dear”, the rock laughed., “well sorry I can’t help you. Bye now.”
“WAIT”, barak yelled.
But the rockdwarf had returned to it’s previous state and didn’t move.
“Little son of a bitch”, Neo whispered.
“Ok, never mind, let’s cross this village, and .. we’ll wind up, show me that map again”, Laque said, trying to remain calm.
“We’ll wind up .. at that fortress .. so soon?”
“An ancient fortress”, Agouba smiled.
“Everything is ancient around these parts”, Visse said while frowning, and showing her teeth”, so stop saying that you idiot.”
Agouba looked at his feet and turned around.
“Well what are we waiting for? Let’s move on… stupid rock.”
At the end of the village they noticed another cave entrance.
And once again, before they knew it, they had left the village behind them, and had arrived at the ancient fortress.
Agouba seemed shocked.
“What’s wrong?”, Visse asked him, “someone stepped on a Nali plant?”
Neo smirked.
“No, no, do any of you even know what this place is???”
“Nooo, we don’t, .. do tell us.”, Barak answered him while looking at a gigantic, impressive what appeared to be a former Nali fortress.
“This is, what the older Nalis call.. the DARK ARENA!”
Every single group member stared up to the mighty building.
And here's Part 11.
Ok, to be honest, i'm kinda "fed up" with Nali skins. NO don't get me wrong, I still ... enjoy writing the story, but .. I'm really looking forward writing the third story.. it'll be so different from the previous two...
COuple of chapters left Don't worry, I'll finish the story and give it a cool ending.
Part 11: The Dark Arena
************************
Seven small figures were wandering around a huge fortress, one of them heavily impressed by what he was seeing.
“I can’t believe it”, Agouba sighed, “this is THE dark arena, where the human once came by, in her “crusade against the Skaarj”.
“So?”, Visse said, vaguely interested
“She defeated a Titan in this arena.. with only a blaster. Well.. maybe a stinger as well.. who knows…”
“How big is this fortress?”
“I don’t know. I’ve never been inside, only heard the old ones talk about it. It has been abandoned for many decades. There are several torture chambers in there, and cells. From what I’ve heard from Ygian, there are 2 routes out of the fortress.”
“So he’s been here before, several times..”
“well duh...”
Laque walked up to the entrance. There were 2 main gates. The doors were gone, obviously destroyed a long time ago. Inside there was nothing but a grim silence, rubble and debris to the left and right.
“Spooky”, Barak whispered.
“I like it”, Visse answered him while touching the old walls who had stood the test of time.
“What does it say?”, Laque asked Agouba when she saw an inscription, near a staircase.
“It’s hard to tell, most of it is erased… I can’t make it out that well.. something about a beast and those who don’t believe.. I’m not sure”.
“The titan?”
“Yes. The Skaarj placed a big, mean Titan in this fortress, and if the Nali were not behaving, they’d be thrown at him. Most of the times instant death followed. If they were lucky. Ygian witnessed the death of his best friend here. He says he still has memories, nightmares of that Titan ripping his friend to pieces…”
“I’ve read about those beasts”, Visse mumbled, “extremely dangerous, but very stupid .”
“The human killed dozens and dozens of them .. so I’ve heard.”
“Whatever, I don’t care about humans that much you see…in fact, I hate them.”
Agouba rolled his eyes.
“Ok then, fine, I’ll shut my mouth.”
“You do that Nali.”
Neo was writing something down in his notepad. This was all so exciting and fantastic. He’d have one heck of a story when he’d return to the “newspaper” on Necron. His boss would simply be amazed. It started out as an ordinary trip to Nalina, closely watching the behaviour of Visse, and now it had become a quest to save old Nali skins out of the hands of the Skaarj.”
“Styling!”, Neo grinned.
“I’ve checked the passageway on the left, no way out..”, Barak yelled.
“Same here”, George replied, “nothing on the right.
“Gee George you as a Skaarj should know this fortress inside out…”, Laque asked him.
George sighed and crossed his arms.
“I wasn’t even born back then.”
“Oh .. heh silly me.. but didn’t your father tell you about this place?”
“No he didn’t eh.. I don’t feel like talking about.. him very much. LOOK.. I don’t know this place ok?”
Agouba patted Laque on the shoulder.
“Yes?”
“Why don’t we check the upper floor?”
Laque ran her tongue over her lips, and showed a sarcastic expression.
“You’re so smart, Agouba…”
Agouba smiled.
“Yeah Agouba, you’re the man”, Rumiko laughed and slapped him on the back.
“Careful there”, he sighed, “I have a bad back!”
“It looks like were going somewhere now”, Visse shouted at the others.
They entered a long what appeared to be rotating hallway. Everywhere there were lanterns.. and some of them were lit. Bad news!
“Ok”, Visse whispered,” we’ve got company. Everybody, lay low, I’ll go and check out who’s behind our tails…right George.”
George muttered something and looked at his tail.
“I like my tail thank you very much!”
Visse crawled down the hallway, e-knife ready as always. She noticed a couple of steps, and slowly crouched towards them. The yellow moody lighting really added to the situation. Visse started feeling at home.
She slowly placed her foot on the first step, her back against the wall.
All of the sudden she heard voices. She couldn’t make out what kind of voices. Those weren’t Skaarj, nor were it Necris.
She listened, and listened to the voices. There were 5 of them. Whoever they might be. Slowly, carefully she took another step, not really sure if there could be someone out there, waiting for her.
What if the voices had heard them coming? What if the voices she heard right now, were a simple decoy. What if there were “creatures” waiting for her “out there”.
She signalled Laque for backup. Laque slowly crawled towards Visse, not making one sound.
Visse signalled Laque there were 5 creatures out there. She listened to the voices, and still couldn’t make out who they’d belong to.
“A-g-o-u-b-a”, Visse carefully whispered.
Laque nodded and signalled Barak. He immediately understood and grabbed Agouba on his left arm.
“We need your help kid”, he mumbled, “so don’t make a sound, and follow me.”
Agouba nodded, not sure what was about to happen.
When they arrived near Visse and Laque, Visse asked him to listen. Carefully listen. Maybe he’d recognise the voices.
Agouba concentrated himself, locking out the outside world. He was alone, with his thoughts. Nothing, but silence. Then, he focused on the voices outside.
Visse swallowed a couple of times, looking at Agouba and her knife.
All of the sudden the Nali “woke up”.
“And?”, Visse asked him.
“The voices belong to Krall soldiers”, Agouba sighed.
“Krall?”, Laque whispered, “I’ve never fought any Krall, nor have I seen any in my entire life. Care to explain.”
“Yes”, Agouba said while whipping the sweat of his head, “this took a lot of effort excuse me. The Krall .. you see. Used to form an alliance with the Skaarj in the Skaarj/Human war. But something went wrong, and the Krall were attacked by the Skaarj. Finally, they fell back to their homeworld and it was to believed they never showed their faces again, not on Nalina.”
“Guess you guys were wrong”, Barak mumbled, “how do we deal with this .. Kralls?”
“Oh, they’re not as quick as a Skaarj”, Agouba sighed,” but they wield a dangerous weapon, some sort of a electro stinger … that’s what Ygian
once told me.. he could’ve been wrong.”
Visse gestured at Neo, Rumiko and George.
“Ok, here’s the deal”, she carefully whispered, “we’ve got company. Company we’ve, aside from our fellow Nali here, never heard off. Company which goes by the name of Kralls”.
“Will we engage attack upon them?”, Neo said while trying to take a look outside.
“Careful”, Visse whispered, “we don’t want them to know we’re here. If necessary we’ll have to take them out.
BUT we need to step out of the way of conflict. We need to slip passed them. IF possible.”
“IF not?”
“If not, we’ll use our miniguns on them. Shouldn’t take too long.”
“I’ve lost mine”, Neo swallowed.
“How could you? Wait, don’t you still have your portable minigun?”
Visse shook her head while Neo took out his portable.
“Sorry…”
“Rightee, we need to get outside first, this might be a trap, who knows.. be prepared.”.
The moment Laque had finished her sentence, the small group got to it’s feet, and shouldered their weapons.
“Ready.. 1.. 2..3…”
On 3 the Necris jumped outside, pointing their guns to the left and right.
Nothing. No Kralls in sight. Death silence all of the sudden.
“****”, Visse hissed,” they’re gone! This is bad news! They must’ve heard us!
“But h..h..how?” Barak stuttered.
One floor below them, a Krall commander ordered his 4 soldiers to engage attack upon the intruders. He took out a small book, and wrote something down:
Log of commander N’Shra’Tkreeli’
Leader of the alpha Krall division.
Today we’ve inspected the ruins of the old dark arena. What once was a place of doom for Nalis has now changed into the remains of a shady past of Nalina. We’ve come here cause we thought me might have found old weapons and ammo, any info regarding the Skaarj. The day of reckoning is coming closer and closer.
But now it seems we have stumbled upon an unexpected, somewhat annoying issue. We have company.
As Krall commander of this unit, they mustn’t know of our arrival, so therefore we shall eliminate them.
Done.
This message will transmit itself to KraLgan, within the next 3 Krygis (one Krygi= 0.3 terran minutes).
It will erase itself from the book, so no evidence shall remain, if we fail.
Cmdr. N’Shra out.
He closed the book and walked up to his soldiers. They were already standing near the left and right door on the top floor. These ruins enabled extra passages to the main hall.
N’shra ordered his soldiers to proceed, with caution.
“Sir”, one Krall soldier said through a transmitter, “we’ve picked up 7 life signs.”
“Put your weapon in assault mode soldiers”, the commander ordered.
Carefully, sneaking along the walls, the Krall closed in on the “lifeforms”
“They’re right behind the corner, sir.. we’re ready. Waiting for your signal.”
“On my mark, engage attack. Destroy every target within range!”
…
“NOW!”
The Krall ran towards the steps, and jumped outside, scanning their surroundings and eagerly firing their weapons.
“é@*$é”’!!”, the commander growled.
“We’ve been taken for fools here!”
In front of them were 7 Nali rabbits, jumping up and down.
“Damn… Nali rabbits ? Where did they come from ?
“Up here”, a Necris voice rang from above the Kralls. Before they could react, 4 miniguns made mince meat out of the Kralls.
N’shra and 2 other Kralls fell back in the hallway, covering their escape route with returning fire.
Visse jumped down, followed by Laque and Barak.
She looked down the hallway.
“No sign of them.”
“Should we go after them, Laque”, Barak mumbled.
“Nah, probably not. Come to think of it, this is a perfect opportunity for us to escape. Let’s make our way for that big hole in the wall, down below.”
Visse and Barak nodded. They helped the others down from the ‘ceiling’, and jumped down in the arena.
“Good thing there were so many holes in the ceiling.. only took us a couple of trinitons to get up there and fool our attackers” Visse smiled.
“Yeah and those rabbits… hehe.. a welcome bonus…” Barak patted one on the back.
“And of course thanks to the cloak technology we Necris have, the Krall couldn’t detect us.”
“C’mon, no time to waste, let’s move!”, Laque ordered the others. They followed her into that big hole in the wall…
“Hm.. all we have here .. is a … closed off passage. Agouba?” Laque asked him in a firm voice;
“Any other way out?”
“Eh yes there is.. but I want George to promise something…”
“Okay quickly, we don’t have much time”, George sniffed.
“Not a word to the other Skaarj about this”
“How would I do that? I’m a renegade Skaarj now, moron!”
“oH yeah…”
“Ok, where’s the other passage way?”, Visse hissed, “just like Laque said, we don’t have much time left before those other Krall come back!”
“Right .. eh.. Ygian told me about this.. to the left… right here.. this wall. A trigger… somewhere. . yeah here”
Agouba pushed a lever and a secret wall opened.
A small room laid in front of them and a teleporter on the far end. The left wall displayed a picture of a huge beast.
“Oh no, ancient Nali godess Vandore be with me! This can’t be true!”, Agouba yelled!
“What?” Barak asked , trying to calm him down.
“This path leads to Spirevillage, the home of the dragon… MORBIAS!!!”
“Dragon”, Visse whispered. She couldn’t help but frowning and scratching her left cheek.
“There are dragons on this world?”
“Oh MORBIAS is an ancient Nali dragon.. he used to live in the outer skirts of Nalina, but the war forced him to look for another home.. older Nalis say that he choose the abandoned Spirevillage! And it’s the truth!”
“Well, no time for this now, we’ll deal with the dragon when we arrive there”, Laque said, determined as always.
“But but.. you don ‘t know how dangerous this dragon is! We, all Nalis fear him!”
“It looks like we’re up to a dangerous enemy Laque”, Barak whispered.
“We’re in for a game, a match on life and death.”
“More like … a deathmatch…”
“Deathmatch .. Morbias..”, Neo sighed.,” perfect … just what I need for what’s to come! Will we prevail, shall we fail..”
“Quiet Neo”, Visse said with a husky voice. She grabbed her e-knife and pushed Agouba through the teleporter.
”Ok, let’s go .. eh.. everybody!”
The others soon followed Agouba through the teleporter. When Rumiko, the last one of them remaining in the fortress, stepped in the teleporter, the walls closed.
“Grr, we missed them!”, a Krall soldier yelled while running down the corridor. He was heavily panting , trying to catch his breath.
“Told you to keep your cool soldier”, N’shra muttered,” the air is different here..”
“Well looks like our .. enemies have disappeared. I’m calling this mission off, we’ll return to our planet. Let’s return to the ship.”
The remaining Krall went to their vessel and took off.
But what ever happened to the others? Had they arrived in Spirevillage…?
And what about Morbias?
Ok, to be honest, i'm kinda "fed up" with Nali skins. NO don't get me wrong, I still ... enjoy writing the story, but .. I'm really looking forward writing the third story.. it'll be so different from the previous two...
COuple of chapters left
Don't worry, I'll finish the story and give it a cool ending.Part 11: The Dark Arena
************************
Seven small figures were wandering around a huge fortress, one of them heavily impressed by what he was seeing.
“I can’t believe it”, Agouba sighed, “this is THE dark arena, where the human once came by, in her “crusade against the Skaarj”.
“So?”, Visse said, vaguely interested
“She defeated a Titan in this arena.. with only a blaster. Well.. maybe a stinger as well.. who knows…”
“How big is this fortress?”
“I don’t know. I’ve never been inside, only heard the old ones talk about it. It has been abandoned for many decades. There are several torture chambers in there, and cells. From what I’ve heard from Ygian, there are 2 routes out of the fortress.”
“So he’s been here before, several times..”
“well duh...”
Laque walked up to the entrance. There were 2 main gates. The doors were gone, obviously destroyed a long time ago. Inside there was nothing but a grim silence, rubble and debris to the left and right.
“Spooky”, Barak whispered.
“I like it”, Visse answered him while touching the old walls who had stood the test of time.
“What does it say?”, Laque asked Agouba when she saw an inscription, near a staircase.
“It’s hard to tell, most of it is erased… I can’t make it out that well.. something about a beast and those who don’t believe.. I’m not sure”.
“The titan?”
“Yes. The Skaarj placed a big, mean Titan in this fortress, and if the Nali were not behaving, they’d be thrown at him. Most of the times instant death followed. If they were lucky. Ygian witnessed the death of his best friend here. He says he still has memories, nightmares of that Titan ripping his friend to pieces…”
“I’ve read about those beasts”, Visse mumbled, “extremely dangerous, but very stupid .”
“The human killed dozens and dozens of them .. so I’ve heard.”
“Whatever, I don’t care about humans that much you see…in fact, I hate them.”
Agouba rolled his eyes.
“Ok then, fine, I’ll shut my mouth.”
“You do that Nali.”
Neo was writing something down in his notepad. This was all so exciting and fantastic. He’d have one heck of a story when he’d return to the “newspaper” on Necron. His boss would simply be amazed. It started out as an ordinary trip to Nalina, closely watching the behaviour of Visse, and now it had become a quest to save old Nali skins out of the hands of the Skaarj.”
“Styling!”, Neo grinned.
“I’ve checked the passageway on the left, no way out..”, Barak yelled.
“Same here”, George replied, “nothing on the right.
“Gee George you as a Skaarj should know this fortress inside out…”, Laque asked him.
George sighed and crossed his arms.
“I wasn’t even born back then.”
“Oh .. heh silly me.. but didn’t your father tell you about this place?”
“No he didn’t eh.. I don’t feel like talking about.. him very much. LOOK.. I don’t know this place ok?”
Agouba patted Laque on the shoulder.
“Yes?”
“Why don’t we check the upper floor?”
Laque ran her tongue over her lips, and showed a sarcastic expression.
“You’re so smart, Agouba…”
Agouba smiled.
“Yeah Agouba, you’re the man”, Rumiko laughed and slapped him on the back.
“Careful there”, he sighed, “I have a bad back!”
“It looks like were going somewhere now”, Visse shouted at the others.
They entered a long what appeared to be rotating hallway. Everywhere there were lanterns.. and some of them were lit. Bad news!
“Ok”, Visse whispered,” we’ve got company. Everybody, lay low, I’ll go and check out who’s behind our tails…right George.”
George muttered something and looked at his tail.
“I like my tail thank you very much!”
Visse crawled down the hallway, e-knife ready as always. She noticed a couple of steps, and slowly crouched towards them. The yellow moody lighting really added to the situation. Visse started feeling at home.
She slowly placed her foot on the first step, her back against the wall.
All of the sudden she heard voices. She couldn’t make out what kind of voices. Those weren’t Skaarj, nor were it Necris.
She listened, and listened to the voices. There were 5 of them. Whoever they might be. Slowly, carefully she took another step, not really sure if there could be someone out there, waiting for her.
What if the voices had heard them coming? What if the voices she heard right now, were a simple decoy. What if there were “creatures” waiting for her “out there”.
She signalled Laque for backup. Laque slowly crawled towards Visse, not making one sound.
Visse signalled Laque there were 5 creatures out there. She listened to the voices, and still couldn’t make out who they’d belong to.
“A-g-o-u-b-a”, Visse carefully whispered.
Laque nodded and signalled Barak. He immediately understood and grabbed Agouba on his left arm.
“We need your help kid”, he mumbled, “so don’t make a sound, and follow me.”
Agouba nodded, not sure what was about to happen.
When they arrived near Visse and Laque, Visse asked him to listen. Carefully listen. Maybe he’d recognise the voices.
Agouba concentrated himself, locking out the outside world. He was alone, with his thoughts. Nothing, but silence. Then, he focused on the voices outside.
Visse swallowed a couple of times, looking at Agouba and her knife.
All of the sudden the Nali “woke up”.
“And?”, Visse asked him.
“The voices belong to Krall soldiers”, Agouba sighed.
“Krall?”, Laque whispered, “I’ve never fought any Krall, nor have I seen any in my entire life. Care to explain.”
“Yes”, Agouba said while whipping the sweat of his head, “this took a lot of effort excuse me. The Krall .. you see. Used to form an alliance with the Skaarj in the Skaarj/Human war. But something went wrong, and the Krall were attacked by the Skaarj. Finally, they fell back to their homeworld and it was to believed they never showed their faces again, not on Nalina.”
“Guess you guys were wrong”, Barak mumbled, “how do we deal with this .. Kralls?”
“Oh, they’re not as quick as a Skaarj”, Agouba sighed,” but they wield a dangerous weapon, some sort of a electro stinger … that’s what Ygian
once told me.. he could’ve been wrong.”
Visse gestured at Neo, Rumiko and George.
“Ok, here’s the deal”, she carefully whispered, “we’ve got company. Company we’ve, aside from our fellow Nali here, never heard off. Company which goes by the name of Kralls”.
“Will we engage attack upon them?”, Neo said while trying to take a look outside.
“Careful”, Visse whispered, “we don’t want them to know we’re here. If necessary we’ll have to take them out.
BUT we need to step out of the way of conflict. We need to slip passed them. IF possible.”
“IF not?”
“If not, we’ll use our miniguns on them. Shouldn’t take too long.”
“I’ve lost mine”, Neo swallowed.
“How could you? Wait, don’t you still have your portable minigun?”
Visse shook her head while Neo took out his portable.
“Sorry…”
“Rightee, we need to get outside first, this might be a trap, who knows.. be prepared.”.
The moment Laque had finished her sentence, the small group got to it’s feet, and shouldered their weapons.
“Ready.. 1.. 2..3…”
On 3 the Necris jumped outside, pointing their guns to the left and right.
Nothing. No Kralls in sight. Death silence all of the sudden.
“****”, Visse hissed,” they’re gone! This is bad news! They must’ve heard us!
“But h..h..how?” Barak stuttered.
One floor below them, a Krall commander ordered his 4 soldiers to engage attack upon the intruders. He took out a small book, and wrote something down:
Log of commander N’Shra’Tkreeli’
Leader of the alpha Krall division.
Today we’ve inspected the ruins of the old dark arena. What once was a place of doom for Nalis has now changed into the remains of a shady past of Nalina. We’ve come here cause we thought me might have found old weapons and ammo, any info regarding the Skaarj. The day of reckoning is coming closer and closer.
But now it seems we have stumbled upon an unexpected, somewhat annoying issue. We have company.
As Krall commander of this unit, they mustn’t know of our arrival, so therefore we shall eliminate them.
Done.
This message will transmit itself to KraLgan, within the next 3 Krygis (one Krygi= 0.3 terran minutes).
It will erase itself from the book, so no evidence shall remain, if we fail.
Cmdr. N’Shra out.
He closed the book and walked up to his soldiers. They were already standing near the left and right door on the top floor. These ruins enabled extra passages to the main hall.
N’shra ordered his soldiers to proceed, with caution.
“Sir”, one Krall soldier said through a transmitter, “we’ve picked up 7 life signs.”
“Put your weapon in assault mode soldiers”, the commander ordered.
Carefully, sneaking along the walls, the Krall closed in on the “lifeforms”
“They’re right behind the corner, sir.. we’re ready. Waiting for your signal.”
“On my mark, engage attack. Destroy every target within range!”
…
“NOW!”
The Krall ran towards the steps, and jumped outside, scanning their surroundings and eagerly firing their weapons.
“é@*$é”’!!”, the commander growled.
“We’ve been taken for fools here!”
In front of them were 7 Nali rabbits, jumping up and down.
“Damn… Nali rabbits ? Where did they come from ?
“Up here”, a Necris voice rang from above the Kralls. Before they could react, 4 miniguns made mince meat out of the Kralls.
N’shra and 2 other Kralls fell back in the hallway, covering their escape route with returning fire.
Visse jumped down, followed by Laque and Barak.
She looked down the hallway.
“No sign of them.”
“Should we go after them, Laque”, Barak mumbled.
“Nah, probably not. Come to think of it, this is a perfect opportunity for us to escape. Let’s make our way for that big hole in the wall, down below.”
Visse and Barak nodded. They helped the others down from the ‘ceiling’, and jumped down in the arena.
“Good thing there were so many holes in the ceiling.. only took us a couple of trinitons to get up there and fool our attackers” Visse smiled.
“Yeah and those rabbits… hehe.. a welcome bonus…” Barak patted one on the back.
“And of course thanks to the cloak technology we Necris have, the Krall couldn’t detect us.”
“C’mon, no time to waste, let’s move!”, Laque ordered the others. They followed her into that big hole in the wall…
“Hm.. all we have here .. is a … closed off passage. Agouba?” Laque asked him in a firm voice;
“Any other way out?”
“Eh yes there is.. but I want George to promise something…”
“Okay quickly, we don’t have much time”, George sniffed.
“Not a word to the other Skaarj about this”
“How would I do that? I’m a renegade Skaarj now, moron!”
“oH yeah…”
“Ok, where’s the other passage way?”, Visse hissed, “just like Laque said, we don’t have much time left before those other Krall come back!”
“Right .. eh.. Ygian told me about this.. to the left… right here.. this wall. A trigger… somewhere. . yeah here”
Agouba pushed a lever and a secret wall opened.
A small room laid in front of them and a teleporter on the far end. The left wall displayed a picture of a huge beast.
“Oh no, ancient Nali godess Vandore be with me! This can’t be true!”, Agouba yelled!
“What?” Barak asked , trying to calm him down.
“This path leads to Spirevillage, the home of the dragon… MORBIAS!!!”
“Dragon”, Visse whispered. She couldn’t help but frowning and scratching her left cheek.
“There are dragons on this world?”
“Oh MORBIAS is an ancient Nali dragon.. he used to live in the outer skirts of Nalina, but the war forced him to look for another home.. older Nalis say that he choose the abandoned Spirevillage! And it’s the truth!”
“Well, no time for this now, we’ll deal with the dragon when we arrive there”, Laque said, determined as always.
“But but.. you don ‘t know how dangerous this dragon is! We, all Nalis fear him!”
“It looks like we’re up to a dangerous enemy Laque”, Barak whispered.
“We’re in for a game, a match on life and death.”
“More like … a deathmatch…”
“Deathmatch .. Morbias..”, Neo sighed.,” perfect … just what I need for what’s to come! Will we prevail, shall we fail..”
“Quiet Neo”, Visse said with a husky voice. She grabbed her e-knife and pushed Agouba through the teleporter.
”Ok, let’s go .. eh.. everybody!”
The others soon followed Agouba through the teleporter. When Rumiko, the last one of them remaining in the fortress, stepped in the teleporter, the walls closed.
“Grr, we missed them!”, a Krall soldier yelled while running down the corridor. He was heavily panting , trying to catch his breath.
“Told you to keep your cool soldier”, N’shra muttered,” the air is different here..”
“Well looks like our .. enemies have disappeared. I’m calling this mission off, we’ll return to our planet. Let’s return to the ship.”
The remaining Krall went to their vessel and took off.
But what ever happened to the others? Had they arrived in Spirevillage…?
And what about Morbias?
Everybody, lay low, I’ll go and check out who’s behind our tails…right George.” George muttered something and looked at his tail. “I like my tail thank you very much!” .......... 
Nice Sorry Neo that your fed up with this story, but you left us hungry for more.
Nice Sorry Neo that your fed up with this story, but you left us hungry for more.
Last edited:
Maybe.. actually i'm not kidding here, next story will be very different from this one...
But since i'm "publishing" it on Puf, i'll have to watch my words.
Probably will make an uncut version.
that's it.
C'mon people, couple of serious comments really wouldn't hurt...
14 pages? Never expected this thing to grow this large..
But since i'm "publishing"
it on Puf, i'll have to watch my words.Probably will make an uncut version.
that's it.
C'mon people, couple of serious comments really wouldn't hurt...14 pages? Never expected this thing to grow this large..
Last edited:
Originally posted by lafnboy88
Okay Zenda, i sent it. You'll crack up when you see this...
Thx for sending it - I appreciate the effort.
Unfortunately, I couldn't open it. It arrived as a zero byte file.
Nah only up to 7-8 pages.. not that much
BTW i'm not really sick and tired of Nali Skins, so don't take me wrong here.. I still enjoy writing this story.. HELL I started posting it back on july the 22nd... or 23th whatever
BTW i'm not really sick and tired of Nali Skins, so don't take me wrong here.. I still enjoy writing this story.. HELL I started posting it back on july the 22nd... or 23th whatever
- Status