Looks really good, but (since the face is still being worked on, I'll add my input) the face looks too human. The one before looks much more reptilian while the new one looks like a human with a smashed nose.
I would say play-up the forehead, dent in for the eyes, and make them more narrow, and then go for the more convex muzzle-like nose and mouth, and the pronounced cheekbones of the previous version.
The Queen also had full-on tusks, so while they weren't a part of your previous Hybrid females, they certainly wouldn't be amiss.