Im not sure I understand, can you please elaborate, itll be a great deal of help. Thanks
Your new crop is much better but the composition is off. Your subject is too centered. Although it calls immediate attention to your subject but (and i mean no disrespect) the composition is amateurish. Its a commonly learned trade to center your subject. Your parents did it, their parents did it. You looked at all of the family photos when you where young and learned to do this so instinctively you do this without even thinking about it. It isnt always easy thing to unlearn and it is what sets Joe Average from a Pro.
Your subject should almost never be centered.
Rule of thirds is a well established way to compose your subjects and make them interesting. Turn on your TV or fire up your favorite movies.. you will notice that in almost every scene your favorite actor or actresses has been framed on one side or the other. It really depends on what side they are facing. There are of course exceptions to the rule which can be fun to play with.
I'm not saying you can't take photos of your subjects with them in the center, (especially when your subject is a fast moving bird and your focus point is in the center) just understand that you will need to fix your composition in post to make it more interesting.
Here are three examples of how to fix it using the Rule of Thirds with an 8x10 crop:
Example 1: This shot has the "dead space" or empty space in front of the subject. Now the subject looks like it is moving forward in motion instead of standing still. Good composition but not great.
Example 2: This shot has a tighter and more balanced composition than example one, however it has too much dead space in front of the subject.
Example 3: With some digital rotating you have instantly solved the angle/direction problem with the subject, thus allowing for a tighter portrait crop which allows only a small amount of dead space in front of the subject. This image can be further cropped on both the top and the left sid but we are already loosing so much resolution. Over all the composition is much more interesting and your photo is more filled with the subject than dead space.