Rikki - Mercfemb Wip

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Slaughter

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Ask and you shall receive!

This is a request i´m doing for Starry Might:)

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And she already wrote her Bio:
Rikki=Name: Erika ''Rikki'' Kolman|Age: 28|Race: Human||Data:|Erika Kolman (who prefers to go by her nickname ''Rikki'') is a privateer who trades with and shuttles goods for various mercenary fleets, including the 7th Mercenary Fleet and the Blue Vanguard.||One evening, Rikki was watching the Tournament on Neurovision (she's not a fan, but there was nothing else good on that night). She saw a guy score a perfect Shock Combo on *FOUR* hapless opponents, which impressed her greatly. When the arena camera got closer to him, however, she nearly choked on the soda she was drinking - the guy was actually Hadrian Kolman, her younger brother!||Rikki had not heard from him since he became a bodyguard for the powerful and famous arms smuggler Jihan Nyhn several years ago. Why is he fighting in the Tournament now?||Jumping up from her chair, she decided to find out. And she decided that the best way to do that was to enter the Tournament herself. (She wasn't worried about how she would fare in battle, since she knew a thing or two about armed combat and handling guns in order to protect herself from would-be bandits and space pirates.)||And so she's recently entered the Tournament to catch up with Hadrian and get the full story from him. Her quiet strength and her lethality with the Minigun have won the admiration of many, many Tournament contestans and fans. Furthermore, her disarmingly beautiful face (the Kolman family has excellent genes, indeed!) and her strong-willed yet gentle personality have captivated lots of male Tourney fans (and Wraith of the SuperNova team, as well...).||
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daloonie

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Really good. I see you are getting your inspiration back. Good to have you back :) ;)

I would like to see some scratches on the camouflaged armor too(boobies and shoulder pads). Also you need some sharpening on the belt plus some shadows. Would make it look more real.
Her face is looking rather good but it looks a bit blurry around her eyes.
Also the frontal hair should, IMO, be a bit longer and have a sharper curve so it leaves a bit more of the face open. Maybe lower the whole part a bit down!?
You also have some serious seams on the bandages.

All in all really good theme, hope you get this done fast, I like it. :)
 
Starry Might

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She looks terrific! Great job as always, Slaughter. :D:tup:

Glad to see you showing her off here.

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the_rex said:
Also the frontal hair should, IMO, be a bit longer and have a sharper curve so it leaves a bit more of the face open. Maybe lower the whole part a bit down!?
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Actually, Rikki's hairstyle is supposed to be like that of Claire Redfield of "Resident Evil" series fame:

http://www.residentevilfan.com/encyclopedia/details.asp?id=17
 
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Starry Might

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TheSlaughter said:
I´m pretty much done now.
If you wan´t something changed Starry just let me know.:)

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y106/Dropkick60606/rikkiwip_08.jpg
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Looks okay to me. :):tup:

All you need to do now is give her Team Colors (I personally don't play CTF4, but go ahead and give her 4 team colors to make people like Da Spadger happy ;)), do her .upl and .int file, pack her up, and ship her to SaD! :clap:

EDIT: I just remembered something: When you do her attributes (e.g. Aggressiveness, Accuracy, etc.), make them identical to Lauren's. And make her Favorite Weapon the Minigun, too (as per her Bio). :)

[offtopic]P.S. - Like my new Avatar? I scanned Prima's "UT 2003" guide, and cut this particular picture out of it.[/offtopic]
 
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Turret 49

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I thought she might be Kolman's sister without even looking at the bio! :lol:

She even has the "trademark" bandages :lol:
 
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N I C E, that is going on my Blood Reavers team!

actually i think most of my Blood Reavers are Slaughter skins lol.
 
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Turret 49

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Starry Might said:
Like my new Avatar? I scanned Prima's "UT 2003" guide, and cut this particular picture out of it.[/offtopic]
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I think it should be darkened slightly IMO.
 
Starry Might

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Turret 49 said:
I thought she might be Kolman's sister without even looking at the bio! :lol:

She even has the "trademark" bandages :lol:
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:D

Anyhoo, thanks for the nice comments about my Avatar.

Turret 49 said:
I think it should be darkened slightly IMO.
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You're right. In fact, when I saw your post, I fixed it. :) (I also took the opportunity to fix another little thing about it that I had missed the first time, too.)
 
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Starry, hope you don't mind but I felt your bio was good, but a bit informal and wordy.
I took the liberty of doing a quick edit. I think this flows a bit better. If you agree feel free to use it, else just ignore it. ;)

One evening, Rikki was watching the Tournament on Neurovision; there was nothing else on worth watching. She saw a guy score a perfect Shock Combo on *FOUR* hapless opponents. Rikki was greatly impressed. When the arena camera got closer to him she nearly choked on her soda. The guy was Hadrian Kolman, her younger brother!||Rikki had not heard from him since he became a bodyguard for the powerful and famous arms smuggler Jihan Nyhn several years ago. "Why is he fighting in the Tournament now?", she wondered.||Jumping up from her chair, she decided to find out. She felt the best way to do that was to enter the Tournament herself. She had fared well in the past against would-be bandits and space pirates. The tournament opponents seemed more of the same.||She has recently entered the Tournament to find Hadrian and get the full story from him. Her lethality with the Minigun has won the admiration of most Tournament contestants and many fans, while her disarmingly beautiful face and strong-willed, yet gentle, personality captivate many men, fans and competitors alike. Most notably, Wraith of the SuperNova team. ||
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Starry Might

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Vailias said:
Starry, hope you don't mind but I felt your bio was good, but a bit informal and wordy.
I took the liberty of doing a quick edit. I think this flows a bit better. If you agree feel free to use it, else just ignore it. ;)
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You have done some stuff better than me. :)

How 'bout this one (I've integrated parts of your version into it, and I added to and edited it some, as well)?:

Rikki=Name: Erika ''Rikki'' Kolman|Age: 28|Race: Human||Data:|Erika Kolman (who prefers to go by her nickname ''Rikki'') is a privateer who trades with and shuttles goods for various mercenary fleets (including the 7th Mercenary Fleet and the Blue Vanguard) in her personal shuttle, the ''Kon Rikki'' (a pun on ''Kon Tiki'').||One evening, Rikki was watching the Tournament on Neurovision (she's not a fan of it, but there was nothing else on worth watching that night). She saw a guy score a perfect Shock Combo on *FOUR* hapless opponents, which greatly impressed her. When the arena camera zoomed-in closer to him, what she saw caused her to nearly choke on the soda she was drinking.||The guy was actually Hadrian Kolman, her younger brother!||Rikki had not heard from him since he became a bodyguard for the powerful and famous arms smuggler Jihan Nyhn several years ago. ''Why is he fighting in the Tournament?'', she wondered to herself.||Jumping up from her chair, she decided to find out. She felt the best way to do that was to enter the Tournament herself. She had fared well in the past against would-be bandits and space pirates. To her, the Tournament opponents seemed to be just more of the same.||And so she's recently entered the Tournament to catch up with Hadrian and get the full story from him. Her quiet strength in battle and her lethality with the Minigun have won the admiration of most Tournament contestants and fans. Furthermore, her disarmingly beautiful face and her strong-willed, yet gentle, personality have captivated lots of men, fans and competitors alike (including Wraith of the SuperNova team...).||
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I think we should both take credit on this one. :D

EDIT: Whoops, too late - Slaughter sent it! That's okay. :)
 
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