Okay... here is a comic book story I'm working on:
at a meeting in SIFA16 after a sucsesfull mission:
Unknown man: Hello, I am Mr. Black. I will be your mission coordinator and support from now on.
Alynn Stratt: where is Sometharo?
Mr. Black: Not now, we must wait until everyone is here.
Alynn: okay, fine with me.
A few of the members walk in the room and sit down in their appropriate spots.
Mr. Black: Great job guys, the mission was a GREAT sucsess! the smugglers are now being sent to prison!
Alynn: We found out where the shipment was headed: Stratton Wherehouse. thats right here in washington.
Mr. black: yes, its a damn good thing those illegal weapons are in good hands now! I can never thank you enough for stopping that shipment!
Just now, Elgin coates walks in the room, late as usual.
Elgin: Hey, What the hell, wheres my dad?
Mr. Black: Elgin, you might want to sit down for this...
Elgin: **** YOU! tell me where he is!
Alynn: yeah, I am a little curios as to Sometharo's location too...
Mr. black: Elgin, Your father has been... assassinated.
elgin: **** YOU! TELL ME THE TRUTH! WHERES MY DAD!?
Mr. Black looks over at a TV:
TV: its been two hours since the frightning Assassination of Sometharo Coates. our spirrits our with him...
Mr. Black turns off the tv.
Elgin: **** YOU! I ****ING QUIT!
Elgin Runs out the door, tears in his eyes...
Well guys? how do you like it so far?
at a meeting in SIFA16 after a sucsesfull mission:
Unknown man: Hello, I am Mr. Black. I will be your mission coordinator and support from now on.
Alynn Stratt: where is Sometharo?
Mr. Black: Not now, we must wait until everyone is here.
Alynn: okay, fine with me.
A few of the members walk in the room and sit down in their appropriate spots.
Mr. Black: Great job guys, the mission was a GREAT sucsess! the smugglers are now being sent to prison!
Alynn: We found out where the shipment was headed: Stratton Wherehouse. thats right here in washington.
Mr. black: yes, its a damn good thing those illegal weapons are in good hands now! I can never thank you enough for stopping that shipment!
Just now, Elgin coates walks in the room, late as usual.
Elgin: Hey, What the hell, wheres my dad?
Mr. Black: Elgin, you might want to sit down for this...
Elgin: **** YOU! tell me where he is!
Alynn: yeah, I am a little curios as to Sometharo's location too...
Mr. black: Elgin, Your father has been... assassinated.
elgin: **** YOU! TELL ME THE TRUTH! WHERES MY DAD!?
Mr. Black looks over at a TV:
TV: its been two hours since the frightning Assassination of Sometharo Coates. our spirrits our with him...
Mr. Black turns off the tv.
Elgin: **** YOU! I ****ING QUIT!
Elgin Runs out the door, tears in his eyes...
Well guys? how do you like it so far?