I'll write out a small story, and you tell me what you think.
He walked 13 paces exiting the living room, and entering the kitchen, where their where 2 bodies laying on the cream colored tiles, one, about 5 and a half feet long, with brunet hair, more than likely a house wife, while the other, slightly taller, was more than likely the man she was having an affair with. As the dark man walked into the corner, and, brandished his 8 inch blade, he thought to himself, "Never worked for this, it was working for me." Then he he walked out of the room, nonchalantly kicking the supposedly cheating man in the rib, and said, "dirty scum, **** like me is better than yous'. " Then, stuffed the rubber gloves into his pocket, muttering to himself how he was well paid, but not well enough to justify his horrid actions. Life was hard, and their are few opportunities in this god forsaken country, he had no choice.
The hiter glanced to left, and his 6, and gave an impatient look at the man in front of him as he yanked the 9000$ out of the this hand, and walked away.
He walked 13 paces exiting the living room, and entering the kitchen, where their where 2 bodies laying on the cream colored tiles, one, about 5 and a half feet long, with brunet hair, more than likely a house wife, while the other, slightly taller, was more than likely the man she was having an affair with. As the dark man walked into the corner, and, brandished his 8 inch blade, he thought to himself, "Never worked for this, it was working for me." Then he he walked out of the room, nonchalantly kicking the supposedly cheating man in the rib, and said, "dirty scum, **** like me is better than yous'. " Then, stuffed the rubber gloves into his pocket, muttering to himself how he was well paid, but not well enough to justify his horrid actions. Life was hard, and their are few opportunities in this god forsaken country, he had no choice.
The hiter glanced to left, and his 6, and gave an impatient look at the man in front of him as he yanked the 9000$ out of the this hand, and walked away.
although it is a little disturbing 
