You don't need to have the world 'Infiltration' repeated like that. It's a poor graphic design choice.
Actually, all of this image is a poor graphic design choice. Nothing really 'flows' as it should. Your eye should be able to follow a 'trail', if something is properly designed.
You need to pick one style and stick with it. The posterized and cut-out backgrounds don't really fit with the clean model at all. The outline takes away from the look, especially the outlined text. I'm assuming you were going for a 'U.S. Army' patch look?
It's simply too cluttered for the size. Try removing all of the text. If you are going to include text, I would suggest using more of a grey tone, possibly even white. Also, in most cases, smaller text is better. And if you can make the image flow (with better placement of value, shape and fonts), then all-the-better.