After some tries with her skirt (tried making it whole chainmail - looks not good due the gaps in he model, masking the cloth out - this really looks weird
) I decided to give her a chainmail like underwear (I doubt this is very comfortable though) to get rid of that boring black areas.
After that I tried some things with the cloth, still not totally happy with it, but for the moment it will stay. I also changed the belt to a more golden egypt like and added a small texture shining through the gem on her chest.
I also tried myself as a storyteller and wrote some bios for the chars.
Here we go:
Shantara=Name: Shantara|Age: 22|Race: Human||Data:|Born into an extremly rich family Shantara got soon bored of her life. She just didn`t want to become a doctor like her parents and on one usual TV sunday watching the tournament battles she decided to give her life a new direction.|After some very promising matches in the amatuer leagues she got contracted by the Supernova team. After a battle against an egypt team called "Sun Blade" she fell in love with Matophis, a very famous and recognized egyptian warrior and joined the egyptian team as first member not born on Anubis.|First the egyptian fancommunity was sceptic due her non egyptian looks and called her trademark (a ponytail hairstyle) unfitting but after some great fights she also gained their hearts. Unfortunately her relationship to Matophis lasted not very long due he got killed by Gorge in a small controverse outside the tournaments.|From that day on she trained even harder with only one goal in mind: to track down Gorge in the tournaments and ultimately get rid of him outside the tournaments.|Revenge is a meal which should be served icecold.
Dynaheir=Name: Dynaheir|Age: 29|Race: Human||Data:|Dynaheir is a fighting nature but her deeds have less to do with the cold and military tactics of many others, more this beauty is a warrior with heart combining braveness with phantasy. Her teammates respect her as a strong and intelligent fighting machine.|Above all this she stayed a nice female person not loosing any of her charisma and attractiveness in a combat suit. She fears nothing and brings all things to their ends. This ability does not end up with the accomplishement of orders, it helps her in reaching her own goals too.
Condor=Name: Condor|Age: 25|Race: Human||Data:|This "young gun" is truly a hothead. The egyptian blood in Condor makes him a courageous but crazy warrior.|He knows extremly rash moves on the battlefield which gives everyone something to worry about. Should he ever curb his recklessness, he may become a brillant warrior.
Radament=Name: Radament|Age: 32|Race: Human||Data:|Once a commander in the Desert Legion and a highly decorated veteran in various tribal wars, Radament is the mentor of many recognized warriors like Scarab, Condor or Roc.|After beeing nearly killed and suffering many months due his injuries sustained in the gigantic battle for the Kanduris fields, he served as a drill instructor for the royal troops. As the formed team Sunblade entered the tournament it was clear that he was also on board as supervisor and counselor.|Since one day the (in)famous Juggernaut captain Gorge killed Mathophis, one of his "children", after a small controversion at an aftermatch party he entered the tournament to let him pay.
Pink=Name: The Pink One (real name unknown)|Age: unknown|Race: Human Gaylord||Data:|Think Pink