ok ok ok, settle down
I downloaded and played your map... First thing, you item placement is really really bad
rocket launcher, thigh pads, and 4 heal vials all next to eachother... come up
flak cannon, flak ammo, armor, pistol ammo all next to eachohter
shock rifle, next to 5 health vials....
Layout: whats up with those 2 empty rooms... maybe you should but some items in there so its worth going into them. layout seems alright, not very big and id say 3 people would be enough. you should maybe put an item on the ground floor in the 2 story room. That way people you could have a better ambush place? Oh yeah, where the pulse gun is, you should make those beams higher... nobody likes getting caught up on low ceilings. Its hard to tell their is a lift there... maybe add a light?
Textures: seem fine, may want to add some more detail in some places. I think the rain is falling a little too fast... slow down the pan speed. The wet texture for the windows in the ceiling isn't big enough, it doesn't cover the 2 outside windows. Lights and flares seem alright.
Lighting: seemed ok, wasn't paying too much attention
Bots: didn't play with them... don't see why they would have any probs
Nice ambient sounds, it really feels like its raining cats and dogs outside.
ALL in all, nice first dm map... keep up the good work.