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Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by BlueSniper, May 16, 2001.

  1. BlueSniper

    BlueSniper if today was yesterday, what's tomarrow?

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    Okay... here is a comic book story I'm working on:

    at a meeting in SIFA16 after a sucsesfull mission:
    Unknown man: Hello, I am Mr. Black. I will be your mission coordinator and support from now on.
    Alynn Stratt: where is Sometharo?
    Mr. Black: Not now, we must wait until everyone is here.
    Alynn: okay, fine with me.
    A few of the members walk in the room and sit down in their appropriate spots.
    Mr. Black: Great job guys, the mission was a GREAT sucsess! the smugglers are now being sent to prison!
    Alynn: We found out where the shipment was headed: Stratton Wherehouse. thats right here in washington.
    Mr. black: yes, its a damn good thing those illegal weapons are in good hands now! I can never thank you enough for stopping that shipment!
    Just now, Elgin coates walks in the room, late as usual.
    Elgin: Hey, What the hell, wheres my dad?
    Mr. Black: Elgin, you might want to sit down for this...
    Elgin: **** YOU! tell me where he is!
    Alynn: yeah, I am a little curios as to Sometharo's location too...
    Mr. black: Elgin, Your father has been... assassinated.
    elgin: **** YOU! TELL ME THE TRUTH! WHERES MY DAD!?
    Mr. Black looks over at a TV:
    TV: its been two hours since the frightning Assassination of Sometharo Coates. our spirrits our with him...
    Mr. Black turns off the tv.
    Elgin: **** YOU! I ****ING QUIT!
    Elgin Runs out the door, tears in his eyes...

    Well guys? how do you like it so far?
     
  2. ShakKen

    ShakKen Specops Spook

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    A little simple, but portrayal of the scene is key :)

    Don't forget to do your scene layouts on a scrap sheet before you start.
     
  3. ShakKen

    ShakKen Specops Spook

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    Keep in mind that your scrap tests can be as simple or complex as you like. they're justa test run for the scenes.
     
  4. ShakKen

    ShakKen Specops Spook

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    Heres a perfect example of how to use a scenetest. because I didn't like the position of his leg, I changed it.
     
  5. BlueSniper

    BlueSniper if today was yesterday, what's tomarrow?

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    shakken, thanx! you rock! how old are you?
    I'm only 16, so hopefully my skill developes to be as good as yours!
     
  6. phatcat

    phatcat akward cat

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    very cool :D

    I love the "angles" :)
     
  7. Luminuis

    Luminuis Herald of the Newest Dawn

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    Shakken, the next BP?
     
  8. BlueSniper

    BlueSniper if today was yesterday, what's tomarrow?

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    HEY!!! HELLO!

    This post is all about ME!

    7h47z zh4|(|(3n h4z n0 z|(|11z!

    just kidding!

    I need more than ONE person to give me feedback
     
  9. ShakKen

    ShakKen Specops Spook

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    I'm a college senior right now, But I've been drawing since I was 4. 3D Modelling has also given me a good feel for perspective, just keep trying out new stuff and refining the old and you'll do fine :)
     

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