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Old 16th May 2001, 09:43 AM   #1
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Okay... here is a comic book story I'm working on:

at a meeting in SIFA16 after a sucsesfull mission:
Unknown man: Hello, I am Mr. Black. I will be your mission coordinator and support from now on.
Alynn Stratt: where is Sometharo?
Mr. Black: Not now, we must wait until everyone is here.
Alynn: okay, fine with me.
A few of the members walk in the room and sit down in their appropriate spots.
Mr. Black: Great job guys, the mission was a GREAT sucsess! the smugglers are now being sent to prison!
Alynn: We found out where the shipment was headed: Stratton Wherehouse. thats right here in washington.
Mr. black: yes, its a damn good thing those illegal weapons are in good hands now! I can never thank you enough for stopping that shipment!
Just now, Elgin coates walks in the room, late as usual.
Elgin: Hey, What the hell, wheres my dad?
Mr. Black: Elgin, you might want to sit down for this...
Elgin: **** YOU! tell me where he is!
Alynn: yeah, I am a little curios as to Sometharo's location too...
Mr. black: Elgin, Your father has been... assassinated.
elgin: **** YOU! TELL ME THE TRUTH! WHERES MY DAD!?
Mr. Black looks over at a TV:
TV: its been two hours since the frightning Assassination of Sometharo Coates. our spirrits our with him...
Mr. Black turns off the tv.
Elgin: **** YOU! I ****ING QUIT!
Elgin Runs out the door, tears in his eyes...

Well guys? how do you like it so far?
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Old 16th May 2001, 10:11 AM   #2
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A little simple, but portrayal of the scene is key

Don't forget to do your scene layouts on a scrap sheet before you start.
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Old 16th May 2001, 10:15 AM   #3
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Keep in mind that your scrap tests can be as simple or complex as you like. they're justa test run for the scenes.
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Old 16th May 2001, 10:28 AM   #4
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Heres a perfect example of how to use a scenetest. because I didn't like the position of his leg, I changed it.
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Old 16th May 2001, 03:50 PM   #5
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shakken, thanx! you rock! how old are you?
I'm only 16, so hopefully my skill developes to be as good as yours!
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Old 16th May 2001, 05:37 PM   #6
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very cool

I love the "angles"
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Old 16th May 2001, 06:32 PM   #7
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Shakken, the next BP?
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Old 16th May 2001, 07:01 PM   #8
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HEY!!! HELLO!

This post is all about ME!

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just kidding!

I need more than ONE person to give me feedback
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Old 16th May 2001, 08:04 PM   #9
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I'm a college senior right now, But I've been drawing since I was 4. 3D Modelling has also given me a good feel for perspective, just keep trying out new stuff and refining the old and you'll do fine
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