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here is every single poem I made since 2007 and I will not stop
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http://cheetahblack.tripod.com/whyhaveyouchosenmetoloveyou
here is every single poem I made since 2007 and I will not stop
tl;dr:
TO KILL A IDIOT I SWEAT I WILL
NOTHING BUT THE DEMONS
Am I a robot?
Hug me Hug me Hug me
DO YOU NOT FEEL ASHAMED OF YOURSELF
YOU WASTED YOUR LIFE
The plant my Deer is love, the beginner of our circle, the starter of our life, without that plant, I would have never lived, for you wouldn't have been there to eat it.
A ocean breeze flew past my nose
why am I so lonely
What a wonderful choice to dance with me
http://cheetahblack.tripod.com/whyhaveyouchosenmetoloveyou
here is every single poem I made since 2007 and I will not stop
wow, those are just terrible.
no offense, but you might want to try considering something else.
or at least read some real poetry or stylized writing before writing anything. I don't know what english books to advise to you, but if you can read french, well I guess (hope) you already know what to read.
I have written 2 or 3 poems, and my major tip would be re-read. re-read your poem 10 times, maybe more. each minor modification of rhythm or language should lead to an overall re-reading. oh and try to have some organized poems. block of texts aren't really easy to read. try writing in blocks of verses for a change :10 verses, an additional space, 10 verses...
Angst-filled poems aren't for amateurs. those require the most work, and I don't think you can bring that to an acceptable level. try some more easy theme, try a story for example.
but please, stop putting words together like that. Even I am sensitive to the butchering of English which wants to be called "poetry".
"YOU ARE A BLACK NI**ER HAHA"
Some spam my guest book Didn't even write a comment
HE HAS INSULTED TEH BOOK OF GUESTS
Some spam my guest book Didn't even write a comment
HE HAS INSULTED TEH BOOK OF GUESTS
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"YOU ARE A BLACK NI**ER HAHA"
Some spam my guest book Didn't even write a comment
HE HAS INSULTED TEH BOOK OF GUESTS
What the hell are you talking about?
John Keats used a lot of sedative/narcotics in his life. Are you like that when you write your poetry?
Didn't think so.
EDIT: Oh by the way, your poetry reminds me of "OG Loc" in Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas. Just as retarded and meaningless poetry as yours.
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Rofl, what's up with everyone flaming and talking crap about blackcheetah? Have some damn respect people. You guys sicken me.
sorry neonite you are right
who's the creepy guy behind you with the "OMG I wants to rip this ddueds patns off look!"
so in other words you guys are gay?! not that there's anything wrong with it.
And now we know, hopefully the constant badgering will stop now. The gracious cleavage, however, may continue.