warning late night post, lots of syco stuff, and typpos
your maps are improving, the map is certianlyl better then your previous ones i think, altough texturing is weird at places, like the bar in the ceiling with a lamp texture > wtf
and you have too much big boring empty walls, fill it up, make pillars or something, big an empty = boring, the snake head was nice, but still a bit blokcy, certainly his uppart, erm doesnt it have eyes and a noise and stuff ?
the lava everywhere should give light, putting it to unlit alone isnt enough,there should be an ligghtacot on it to give a subtile small glow, very colourfull, high birghntess, slow radius
you also used dynamic light on alot of places i think, hardly noticable, but i do see it in my pc his fps, slows down and doesnt add anything too the overal map > remove, only use it in special cases, where you really need it
items were god although a bit more wouldnt be bad, more ammo or something, floorplan is from quake, cant say anything about it, and the floorplan on itself isnt that good, its too flat, and too simple, you had better copied another map
textures were weird at places, you have way to big files, get the textures you are using out of the package you use now, put it inmylevle or make your own pacakge, and give them a detailtexture
some lights need more light dark contrast, we are talking abut a devil enviroment here, by making big light dark contrast we create a dramatic and scary feeling > wich you need for this kind of map, some corners where dark, like outside, would be better if there was a small light there, looks uninfished now
the texture from the fire should be translucent, its masked now i think, > masked ghey, and it should give yellow lighht, not white, imposseble
the sky moves way too fast, slow it down, do not copy quake exactly, cause it sux
the mountains in the skybox are blue, the map is red, blue and red doesnt match, the colours are fightning eachother and dont create a harmony, use a better mountain texture
havent checkt sound cause i was too lazy to turn of winamp, and havent checkt bots cause im too lazy to fight those bots, i did found the redeemer though, and the lava that hurts to get the rl is nice
cant think of anything else, im going to bed