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Jotun
25th Nov 2001, 03:38 PM
Here's a little song I wrote on one of my more pissed off days. Thought I'd share it with ya in stuff :D It's titled: Best Enemy


You laugh at my life
And feed the fire
That is my strife
Burning higher and higher

Live for my pain
Die for my hate
My cries are in vain
Within my state

So pierce my soul
And kill my heart
I was whole
And you tore me apart

Within my life
Feel the strife
That is me
Broken Serenity
My best enemy

Am I a joke?
Just a tool of trade?
A local hoax?
I am what you made

Beat me to sedation
A fist of sanity
Feel my complication
Of self pity

So put the gun
To my head
I was your son
But now I'm dead...

Within my life
Feel the strife
That is me
Broken serenity
My best enemy




Dedicated to those that want to be the guy in black in a white world

Cap'n Beeb
25th Nov 2001, 03:43 PM
Sweeeeet. :tup:

[PPP]Redman
25th Nov 2001, 03:59 PM
pretty kewl.

Twisted Metal
25th Nov 2001, 04:02 PM
I like it.

LP
25th Nov 2001, 06:21 PM
im liking it too :)

Jotun
25th Nov 2001, 07:44 PM
thanks for the support fellas, i should throw another one out on the board fairly soon

Assymilator
25th Nov 2001, 08:40 PM
cool song

Sam_The_Man
26th Nov 2001, 08:14 AM
Are we going to get to hear it with music? Because I'm not sure how everyone's managed to judge it otherwise... :confused:

[DTK]~*2FazE*~
26th Nov 2001, 10:44 AM
In the mountains of a unkown land.
a man is in pain, the sin of killing?
The sin of fighting? The sin of not praying?
In the end u will be judged by me?

Jotun
26th Nov 2001, 07:55 PM
as soon as i get better at the guitar hehe, just basically listen to any Strapping Young Lad song and use those as the lyrics :D

[DTK]~*2FazE*~
26th Nov 2001, 08:21 PM
I play guitar but i dont play it any more i got mad and quite.