Fliez of gayness

[GMotha]

An irrelevant topic-title only to draw some attention...
ppl that have seen my maps will agree that most of them (if not all of them) are ****ty, so I'd really like some feedback on this...
Click the templates to view the shots in 640*480:

http://www.planetunreal.com/phalanx/donjon/Shot01B.jpg (http://www.planetunreal.com/phalanx/donjon/Shot01.htm)

http://www.planetunreal.com/phalanx/donjon/Shot02B.jpg (http://www.planetunreal.com/phalanx/donjon/Shot02.htm)

BTW: if you really want to know what the fliez of gayness are: click here (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation.php?id=89643) .

[Shin]

Maybe a url to dowload your map would be cool, screenshots look nice, but to really like your map i need to play it ;)

[Bot_40]

The shots look good, but I think it looks a bit too dark.
Those lanterns don't seem to be giving out light. If they are bright enough to give off coronas, then they sould light up the surrounding area quite a bit IMO

[Hourences]

screens must be brighter, in game its good prolly, but shots are to dark to see something, and more detail, more light/lightsources and kill the green, its ghey
and just make the floorplan fu©king good, the base is there, now make it cool :)

btw nice avatar :)