Bonk! .::.A Team Fortress 2 Comic.::.

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Zephirot93

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Hi everyone, I just started a TF2 webcomic series, if you guys would like to check it out.
It's my first webcomic ever and it's only a hobby, so i'm not trying to make it a really serious thing:)
It's fairly new, so I've only got 4 strips until now, but I upload 2 times a week.

The storyline sets around the RED team, and how their incompetency has earned them missions like washing cars, mopping floors, etc. Until one day, their excellence at retrieving the Administrator's "secret package", earned them their first REAL mision.

I know, simple, but it's just chapter one's prologue.

It will be a chapter-based story, like, the next comic continues where the last one left off, BUT, what I'm trying to do is actually give each strip it's own "spice", as to be able to enjoy any of the strips by itself.

This way anybody new to the comic doesn't have to read from the very first one (I know, I currently have only 4 uploads...just wait) if they just want a quick laugh.

I would really appreciate feedback about it, since I´new to this stuff:)

Well, I hope you guys like it!

http://www.bonktf2.thecomicseries.com/
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i know it still needs some work put on it, but i promise I'll get better with every strip:)
 

Twisted Metal

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I'm sorry but that is one of the worst site designs I've seen in my life. Get rid of the repeating background, and black text on a blood red background is not easy on the eyes.
 

Zephirot93

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Feb 27, 2010
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I'm sorry but that is one of the worst site designs I've seen in my life. Get rid of the repeating background, and black text on a blood red background is not easy on the eyes.

I didn't design the site, the website hosting my comics (comicfury.com) has a set of premade layouts available for use editable with html, I dont know a thing about html so all i could really do with it was change the background color,add the picture and some minor tweaking.

And well, I've had no complaints about the colors at all, and I've seen many sites with those colors.
Maybe your monitor is set to too bright ot something, but I'll fix it anyways.
 

Zephirot93

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Feb 27, 2010
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Everybody, just to let you know that Bonk has been revived, after being dead for such a long time.

I decided to restart the plot, due to me wanting an actual plot to follow. You can still read the old archive, just remember we're now focusing on a new plot:)

Go now!