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Sapphire Nights
4th Dec 2001, 09:03 PM
It was a slow night. Just a few no tipping losers in the audience and the familiar stench of old cigarettes. If it where not for a few of my regular customers stopping by I wouldn’t have any green in my G.

I was sitting in the back of the club bored out of my head. Just wanting something, anything to happened to perk me up. I was ready to give up when “she” walked in.

She was stately, wearing a red slip dress and carrying a small gold purse. She walked right into the joint like she owned the place, sat down and lit a Clove cigarette. I was intrigued to say the least.

Two girls approached her and she shooed them away. That made me nervous. But somehow I was drawn to her. She caught me sneaking glances at her and smiled. Then motions me to approach her. I’m shaking and too scared to obey. But my feet say ”Yes!”

I come up to her and break a nervous smile, offering her some wine. She gives me her glass to fill, lingering for a moment as she gently touched my hand. The goblet shakes as I poured the wine. Darn it! So much for being cool. She asks me to sit next to her and I comply.

She sees I am nervous and it amuses her. She smiles like a Cheshire cat and says, “I am Allison.” She tells me to drink some wine and sit close to her.

As the night wears on, her hand finds its way up my leg. Her hand is soft and the stroke is gentle and kind. I finally whisper in her ear, “Would you like a lap dance, Allison?” She nodes quietly and I lead her into one of the club’s private rooms.

The room was decorated in an sophisticated tapestry of reds and off-whites. I direct her to a velvet chair and break into an elaborate dance. I start by slowly moving my hips in a circular motion. Our eyes fixed on each other. I could feel her passion grow as I move in gentle spirals and swirls.

She is seated with her legs open, and I slipped my thighs between hers and sit on her leg. I hold her by the back of her head and pull her close into my chest.

Allison’s hands begin moving up and down my back. Her fingers soft as rose petals. I pull her even closer into my bosom.

The night ran by like a thief, and we lost ourselves in The Dance. The club was closing and it was time to part ways. I escort Allison to her car and we kiss a final night’s goodbye. Our tongues lingering and intertwined.

I never saw her again. But I will never forget that night, the night Allison strolled through my life. Well, I guess I better get back to work.

LordKhaine
4th Dec 2001, 09:06 PM
:eek2:

Sapphire Nights
4th Dec 2001, 09:08 PM
I just posted it and it has 15 views :lol:

Cap'n Beeb
4th Dec 2001, 09:09 PM
What LK said. :eek2:

LordKhaine
4th Dec 2001, 09:09 PM
Oh, I think the intended person was one of those views ;)

Camel
4th Dec 2001, 09:10 PM
Originally posted by LordKhaine
:eek2:


ditto:eek2:

WAnk
4th Dec 2001, 09:12 PM
i think i can feel my passion growing too :O

Jancaz Bru
4th Dec 2001, 09:12 PM
I'll second what you guys said.
:eek: :eek2: :eek2: :eek:

Otherwise, WONDERFUL story, Saph :D

Karma 13
4th Dec 2001, 09:16 PM
So when"s the book coming out? I'll take two.:)

mileena
4th Dec 2001, 09:17 PM
*fans herself*

*scoots closer to allison and looks for sapphire nights*

*gulp*

Camel
4th Dec 2001, 09:17 PM
Originally posted by WAnk
i think i can feel my passion growing too :O


:lol:

Uri19
4th Dec 2001, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by WAnk
i think i can feel my passion growing too :O
So that's how you youngsters call it these days...

WAnk
4th Dec 2001, 09:27 PM
/me scoots closer to leena in hopes of getting some of the leftover humpings

god, leena, alli and sapphire, all together. the resulting orgy could be catastrophic.

Clayeth
4th Dec 2001, 09:28 PM
Originally posted by Karma 13
So when"s the book coming out? I'll take two.:)
screw the book, I want the movie. Then again, the movies are never as good as the book :con:

Uri19
4th Dec 2001, 09:33 PM
Originally posted by WAnk
/me scoots closer to leena in hopes of getting some of the leftover humpings

god, leena, alli and sapphire, all together. the resulting orgy could be catastrophic.
ROFLMAO

I_B_Bangin
4th Dec 2001, 09:37 PM
:eek: :eek2: :eek: :eek2: :eek:

FireSlash
4th Dec 2001, 09:45 PM
:eek2: * infinity factorial squared:p

TomWithTheWeather
4th Dec 2001, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by WAnk
i think i can feel my passion growing too :O

Thats not all thats growing.....

Originally posted by Clayeth|BuF screw the book, I want the movie. Then again, the movies are never as good as the book

I want the real thing! :D

Karma 13
4th Dec 2001, 09:52 PM
screw the book, I want the movie. Then again, the movies are never as good as the book


Three words: Unrated Director's Cut.;)



*me wipes drool from corner of mouth*

Allison
4th Dec 2001, 09:52 PM
Are we still on for Saturday night, Sapph? http://home.nc.rr.com/titonator/mwah.gif

tool
4th Dec 2001, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by WAnk
/me scoots closer to leena in hopes of getting some of the leftover humpings

god, leena, alli and sapphire, all together. the resulting orgy could be catastrophic.

better hope I dont jump in because I hog all the fun :p

WAnk
4th Dec 2001, 09:59 PM
lol, i dunno, for some reason, i really am not worried that will happen tool

tool
4th Dec 2001, 10:06 PM
thats what you think WAnk :D

hal
4th Dec 2001, 10:19 PM
http://www.nsf.gov/sbe/ses/ioc/nuggets/stanford/rocket.gif

Boom
4th Dec 2001, 10:19 PM
/me hyperventilates!

WAnk
4th Dec 2001, 10:26 PM
boom is the only person i am worried about. at least he will try to reinact it with me later :D

tool
4th Dec 2001, 10:26 PM
Originally posted by hal
http://www.nsf.gov/sbe/ses/ioc/nuggets/stanford/rocket.gif

ooh man!!! that rocket makes me so... soo....

and the rest is censored to protect the little kids :p :D

Sapphire Nights
4th Dec 2001, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by Allison
Are we still on for Saturday night, Sapph? http://home.nc.rr.com/titonator/mwah.gif

You know it, Muffin' Love

Sapphire Nights
4th Dec 2001, 10:45 PM
Thanks for the raves, guys & girls. :) This is one of my less graphic stories. In fact, I had to tone this one down for general viewing. :cool:

TWD
4th Dec 2001, 10:47 PM
Apparently somethings going on between Allison and Saph that I missed....

tool
4th Dec 2001, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by TWD
Apparently somethings going on between Allison and Saph that I missed....

maybe its best we dont know about it. :D

pine
4th Dec 2001, 10:52 PM
Originally posted by Sapphire Nights
Thanks for the raves, guys & girls. :) This is one of my less graphic stories. In fact, I had to tone this one down for general viewing. :cool:


Dahaammn, woman!

TWD
4th Dec 2001, 11:03 PM
I used to have plans of cuddlin every female that's ever posted on this forum.....but I don't think I want to do that anymore!

icest0rm
4th Dec 2001, 11:18 PM
All I can say is WOW!

Terminal {DTH}
5th Dec 2001, 01:00 AM
Originally posted by Clayeth|BuF

screw the book, I want the movie. Then again, the movies are never as good as the book :con:

True true. good as THIS story is it feels a bit abored IMO... Slow Beautiful beginning and abrupt ending. :(

Terminal {DTH}
5th Dec 2001, 01:02 AM
Originally posted by Sapphire Nights
Thanks for the raves, guys & girls. :) This is one of my less graphic stories. In fact, I had to tone this one down for general viewing. :cool:

oooo. THAT explains it then. poo! :( could i have an UN-edited version by any chance? :D

Bootsbaby
5th Dec 2001, 01:27 AM
/me sits next to Boom and Leena

oh my!!

Prophetus
5th Dec 2001, 02:09 AM
Sorry guys/gals, but we are going to have to lock and move this thread.

It'll be back in about...uhm...2 minutes...

/me runs to his bedroom

AriTheDog
5th Dec 2001, 02:11 AM
you know, a while back, folks were asking for a story forum...

i think i like the idea better now. :D

Allison
5th Dec 2001, 02:19 AM
Originally posted by Prophetus
It'll be back in about...uhm...2 minutes...

Lmao!! Two minutes? Are you trying to beat Morety's best time? :D

Dus
5th Dec 2001, 02:36 AM
:con:

el Gato
5th Dec 2001, 05:20 AM
Originally posted by Allison

Lmao!! Two minutes? Are you trying to beat Morety's best time? :D

I don't think anyone could 'beat' Morety's Hand Speed record. :D:D:D

Sam_The_Man
5th Dec 2001, 07:38 AM
Sorry guys/gals, but we are going to have to lock and move this thread.

It'll be back in about...uhm...2 minutes...

/me runs to his bedroom

Not before I post! :D

:con: :eek: :eek2: :eek2: :eek: :con:

Latent Image
5th Dec 2001, 07:52 AM
/me pushes thru BuF crowd to get autographs

Syri
5th Dec 2001, 08:12 AM
Nice story saph, do you write a lot of stories like that?

LordKhaine
5th Dec 2001, 08:24 AM
Oh my, Bootsy, mileena, Allison, and SN all in one thread :eek:

The Dopefish
5th Dec 2001, 08:35 AM
(edit: Someone's) status says it all: b0ingee! :o

SkaarjMaster
5th Dec 2001, 08:55 AM
I think you missed something between "bosom." and "The night".

Sapphire Nights
5th Dec 2001, 09:17 AM
Originally posted by SkaarjMaster
I think you missed something between "bosom." and "The night".

There is allot missing between those paragraphs. Otherwise the story would have been nuked. :D

Sapphire Nights
5th Dec 2001, 09:29 AM
Originally posted by [RSU]D-Stroya
Nice story saph, do you write a lot of stories like that?

No, just once and a while. Mostly when someone requests it. Alli "indirectly" asked for the lap dance story (With some help from Boom) :D

TWD
5th Dec 2001, 01:14 PM
No, no I won't believe it. This is all part of that scheme to play with my head AND IT WONT WORK!

Peregrine
5th Dec 2001, 01:51 PM
Originally posted by Sapphire Nights
Thanks for the raves, guys & girls. :) This is one of my less graphic stories. In fact, I had to tone this one down for general viewing. :cool:

So where do we get the "uncut" version, Sapphy???

theDealer{skullface}
5th Dec 2001, 02:03 PM
Jeez, get a life!!!! /me says, then realizes he too has read the entire thing.

:p

8-4-7-2
5th Dec 2001, 02:08 PM
This is one of my less graphic stories. In fact, I had to tone this one down for general viewing.

Feel from to PM me the real version
/me gets all horny from the waiting on it ;)

pine
5th Dec 2001, 02:20 PM
Originally posted by el Gato


I don't think anyone could 'beat' Morety's Hand Speed record. :D:D:D

"hand speed"

Rofl!!

Sapphire Nights
5th Dec 2001, 03:25 PM
Well, the "director's cut" is still in my head :lol: It took me an hour to write that story last night. I will work on it some more and finish it in the next few days.

D66
5th Dec 2001, 03:31 PM
I like a good read

Foetal Youth
5th Dec 2001, 03:33 PM
/me can't wait.
(edit: Someone's) status says it all: b0ingee!
Tru!!
That story 0wnz!

Mute
5th Dec 2001, 03:36 PM
Originally posted by Sapphire Nights
Well, the "director's cut" is still in my head :lol: It took me an hour to write that story last night. I will work on it some more and finish it in the next few days.

Me moves that a new hidden 'pr0n & erotica story forum' be opened for the occasion ;).

(no, not the monkey one, been there, done that... someone should really update it cause Y5 has been slacking!)

Foetal Youth
5th Dec 2001, 03:40 PM
/me seconds that motion :D:D :D

Yellow5
5th Dec 2001, 04:28 PM
You know D66, that picture is just begging to get photoshopped.. in a bad way. :)

Sapphire Nights
5th Dec 2001, 04:32 PM
Well, the problem is I have no way of verifying who is 18 years old. I can't post it here. And I can't just start emailing it silly nilly.

Plus I don't want my email addy floating around. Last time it got out some Goober sent me pix of his nasty looking nude body. :rolleyes:

Also, Allison, do you want your name removed from the story in the more "interesting" version? I don't want to embarrass you :)

Peregrine
5th Dec 2001, 04:54 PM
We could post our pics Saph! Come on...am I over 18???


(First one that says "no" gets a big sloppy wet kiss!)

Allison
5th Dec 2001, 05:01 PM
Originally posted by Sapphire Nights

Also, Allison, do you want your name removed from the story in the more "interesting" version? I don't want to embarrass you :)
Heck no! Are you crazy? Leave it! Oh please, oh pleeeease!

Er...I mean...whatever you want, that's fine with me. :)

Syri
5th Dec 2001, 05:20 PM
you can PM it to me saph, i can scan in my drivers license to prove my age!
(22 incidently)

Allison
5th Dec 2001, 05:38 PM
You boys best be steppin off my lap dance!! Get your own! :mad:



Hehehe. I don't think I've ever used the mad smiley before. I feel so mean and stuff.

larrystorch
5th Dec 2001, 05:42 PM
:eek2:


Originally posted by Peregrine


So where do we get the "uncut" version, Sapphy???

very nice and :eek2: again

Kray
5th Dec 2001, 07:22 PM
So Alli, how do you feel after getting your lap dance?

WAnk
5th Dec 2001, 07:29 PM
i want alli to be my bridesmaid at my wedding :O

if you want to put it up on a webpage, i will host it for you sapph, if people really want to see it that bad :P

BillyBadAss
5th Dec 2001, 07:49 PM
Nice story.:tup:

larrystorch
5th Dec 2001, 07:56 PM
Originally posted by Prophetus
It'll be back in about...uhm...2 minutes...

/me runs to his bedroom

You really need to get back to civilization bud

Allison
5th Dec 2001, 10:00 PM
WAnk is a hottie. ;)


And Kray.... :D

TWD
5th Dec 2001, 10:02 PM
*** Alli has joined #beyondunreal
<TWD> Hello alli
<TWD> liked your lap dance?
*** Alli has quit IRC (Quit: )

PsychoMoggieBagpuss
6th Dec 2001, 05:36 AM
has been BuF'ed

http://buf.beyondunreal.com/

I AM{skullface}
6th Dec 2001, 06:48 AM
sex.

some of the best stuff in the world. :)

Saph, if you write a lot, you should try to pursue it. Your story is pretty damn good. You might be the next Anais Nin. ;)

-I_AM{skullface}


psssstt......theDealer, get the car, we're heading out to Matthews. And for gods sake, bring some $1, $5, and $20's this time!!!

_Zd_3s_
6th Dec 2001, 07:03 AM
Originally posted by I AM{skullface}
Saph, if you write a lot, you should try to pursue it. Your story is pretty damn good. You might be the next Anais Nin. ;)

-I_AM{skullface}
Or the next JK Rowling... :p

Sapphire Nights
6th Dec 2001, 07:12 AM
Originally posted by PsychoMoggieBagpuss|BuF
has been BuF'ed

http://buf.beyondunreal.com/

OMG :eek: :cool: What have I created? ;)

Sapphire Nights
6th Dec 2001, 07:14 AM
ThX Skull and Zd. And the rest of you :)

I will find a place to host the final version.

Mute
6th Dec 2001, 10:41 AM
Originally posted by Allison

Hehehe. I don't think I've ever used the mad smiley before. I feel so mean and stuff.

Laugh! :lol:. you're too nice to ever be really mean and look like you mean it! :)

mobace
6th Dec 2001, 12:04 PM
/me posts so that 50 years from now i can show my grandkids that i was in on this BuF classic

Danger_Dude
6th Dec 2001, 01:05 PM
/me wonders if Alli was a good tipper...

Amanda
6th Dec 2001, 03:33 PM
hmmm... is that BuF-Legal? hehe...

i creamed my pants... ohhhhh hehe

jk

can i post my romance story? its sure to make you "bonified" hehe

Mute
6th Dec 2001, 03:46 PM
Originally posted by Amanda

can i post my romance story? its sure to make you "bonified" hehe

*groan*

urge...to kill... maker... of bad pun... rising... Rising... subsiding... no, Rising again!!!

/me pummels Amanda with blunt objects!

Prophetus
6th Dec 2001, 04:53 PM
Here you go Saph....this is a serious lap dance song for you and Alli:).

(Just a beta, so don't flame me if you don't like it:))

Lap Me Up (http://prophetus.beyondunreal.com/Lapmeup2.wav)


1.5 meg

funkblast
6th Dec 2001, 05:43 PM
WOW i didnt have time to post here earlier and i wanted to say that..... DAMN thats a good story :tup:

Terminal {DTH}
7th Dec 2001, 11:57 AM
DAMN nice Prophetus. i can just about See the bump and grind to that. :D she'd have to be a Bit energitic tho in parts. very ->:cool:

Sapphire Nights
9th Dec 2001, 04:08 PM
Well, I finished the story. I wrote it in such a way I can still post it here. I am just waiting to get it proofed and then I will post it. :)

TomWithTheWeather
9th Dec 2001, 05:48 PM
Which program did you use to create that?

Sapphire Nights
9th Dec 2001, 07:05 PM
My brain and MS Word

FireSlash
9th Dec 2001, 07:16 PM
if you need an extra set of eyes proffing it, ill do it. better 2 sets of eyes than 1. (i get As in english classes :D)

just PM it to me, ill run it though a few times, and send back a edited version (i will not fix your errors, but put what they should be in ()s, so you learn from your errors. otherwise you will always make the same errors.

BlAcK_PlAgUe22
9th Dec 2001, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by Sapphire Nights
My brain and MS Word

Where can i get this program called "Brain" :D

Story looks good :)

Mute
10th Dec 2001, 08:33 AM
how can you rewrite it in a form still postable on this forum? Lots of bad metaphor? ;)

Source: http://news.bbc.co.uk/hi/english/entertainment/arts/newsid_1693000/1693278.stm

'Twitching'

"Her hand is moving away from my knee and heading north. Heading unnervingly and with a steely will towards the pole," he wrote.

"And, like Sir Ranulph Fiennes, Pamela will not easily be discouraged. I try twitching, and then shaking my leg, but to no avail.

"Ever northward moves her hand, while she smiles languorously at my right ear.

"And when she reaches the north pole, I think in wonder and terror - she will surely want to pitch her tent,"

Karsehole
10th Dec 2001, 10:15 AM
U ARE ALL JUST EVIL! I'M ONLY 16 AND SHOULD BE EXPOSED TO THIS KIND OF STUFF!!

/me clicks back to the beginning of this thread for a re-read



:p