I was wondering if we could have an official poetry thread. I'm not much in to poetry myself, but I must admit that there is some work out there that simply amazes me.
I had to make a few poets in my life for school. One made it in the regional newspaper with my face all over the page
This is one I made today, it is a rewritten sonnet of shakespear, the last 2 lines are unchanged. I forgot all about my english homework that was alot and important. It was about some sonnets, we had to explain them. I just rewrote one in like 5 minutes. It sounded very well, but because it was made so quickly and because it was a remake it means it has no feeling at all. I tried to apply funny somewhere but failed miserably.
Not even a bunker
of Bush, shall outlive this rhyme
because you shall be stronger,
and stone will be destroyed by time
when the third war starts,
and removes our very walls and roofs
no bomb will remove your charts,
and you shall keep your moves
against politics and lies,
you shall stand strong
even amongst some of those flies,
your legend will go along
so till the judgement that yourself arise,
you live in this, and dwell in lover's eyes.
I had to make a few poets in my life for school. One made it in the regional newspaper with my face all over the page
This is one I made today, it is a rewritten sonnet of shakespear, the last 2 lines are unchanged. I forgot all about my english homework that was alot and important. It was about some sonnets, we had to explain them. I just rewrote one in like 5 minutes. It sounded very well, but because it was made so quickly and because it was a remake it means it has no feeling at all. I tried to apply funny somewhere but failed miserably.
Not even a bunker
of Bush, shall outlive this rhyme
because you shall be stronger,
and stone will be destroyed by time
when the third war starts,
and removes our very walls and roofs
no bomb will remove your charts,
and you shall keep your moves
against politics and lies,
you shall stand strong
even amongst some of those flies,
your legend will go along
so till the judgement that yourself arise,
you live in this, and dwell in lover's eyes.