Looking for feedback.

[silvermoon]

Hi,

I've posted a couple maps on NaliCity, and I'm looking for some feedback on them, so I know what to change in my future maps. The maps are CTF-Heart, an Egyptian-themed temple, and DM-Mall, a small, open DM map.

The maps are posted at http://nalicity.beyondunreal.com/view_author.php?aid=2271 .

Thanks.

[Twrecks]

Gah! and Egads!
I refuse to d/l based on thosee screenshots.
Your architecture is average to poor, think "believability". And your texture choices bite, even if it looks like you took time to align them.
You need to work on your lighting too.
sorry bud :tdown:

[silvermoon]

Heh... duly noted. And "average to poor" is probably being generous for DM-Mall, :hmm: I designed that one more as an open arena than an architectural masterpiece. If you like open arenas it's fun to play, but it's not real pretty.

In CTF-Heart, I'm semi-happy with some of my artictecture. I'll post shots to show off the better-built parts.

Thanks for the reply, in any case.